RW WK4: Jack Hallows vs ChreeGPT (JACK WINS)

[Bag Mandela]

Regular Battle
Bars due Saturday 16th Nov
Public voting closes Monday
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Overall public vote = 1 vote
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bags vote = 1 vote
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6 lines each (doesn’t have to be 3 bars with a set up, punch format, you have creative freedom)



Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
Rebuttals, late drops (unless you have a 24hr ext) & no shows are an instant loss.

MV & I will reach a conclusion on bar of the week & the winner will receive $20 to purchase a small quantity of narcotics.

@Jack Hallows - As we all know Chree has suffered an untimely demise and for this round will be replaced by ChatGPT aka ChreeGPT. Fixtures will be rearranged for next week so no AI is required.

[Jack Hallows]

Lmfao

[Bag Mandela]

ChreeGPT's verse:

Jack Hallows? More like jack of all fails,
You lack every trait when the beef tips the scales,
No jack of trades, just a hack with no tact,
Only “Jack in the box” ‘cause you pop and collapse.
Try to “jack” my style, but you're lost in the craft,
While I “haul” these bars, you just haul dead laughs

(Input: write a battle rap verse for an opponent called jack hallows, use "jack" idioms and "hal" homophone wordplay)

[Jack Hallows]

don’t know much bout computers but i’ma prime soldat, i fry node watts
which means i Will Smith a kill switch that can make u dI, Robot
heard thru the Vine u beat ur wife & ur Seed, punk. she tried to leave? *CLUNK*
when the missing persons Branch Brush up on the Root cause, the evidence that Sticks’ll point to Chree trunk
this niggas sweet, delicious beef’s a trigger treat but you a different beast
when a man dressed as a Village Peep press ya ding dong, u open the back door cuz u a tricker Chreet
Howl…

[TheShaman]

ChreeGPT's verse was better than Dave's against me lol. I'm impressed.

But I'll give it to Jack, even though I didn't feel like it was very clean. Is soldat even an English word? It means soldier in Danish and German, but it threw me off. Soldier would rhyme just as well, if there's no other meaning to it. Also, I don't personally like words like Chreet, although I get that it get's the point across. To me it's just kind of a stretch; the name is Chree, right? You wouldn't say Chreet except for stretching to make a line work. But other than that, it was good. I liked the *CLUNK* sound effect shit.