WK35: Bag Mandela (5-4) vs Slayerr (7-14) (SLAY WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela @Slayerr.

[Slayerr.]

Were brothers in arms in this rap scene, often at shows as a tag team but with that said
I’m getting sick of having to carry ya bag so next time I’ll wrap one of those around ur head

[Bag Mandela]

You'll know who's the chief when I catch you asleep n brutally rape your booty crease,
You aint nothing but food to me, you'll get this foot long through ya back door like Uber eats

Faggot

[Virbius]

Both dope. Both had great internal rhyme structure. Close but I like the angle of Slayerr’s bar better, was more relevant to his opponent and had more of a narrative.

Vote- Slayerr

[Fresh]

I enjoyed slayerr a lot this week. The best use of his name I've seen yet. Good stuff

Bags wrote a good bar but it was about butt raping his opponent and that kinda takes away from the punch imo. Still well written, just didn't do enough to take slayer this week

v/ slay slay

[Lady Poet]

Both start off fresh to depth
I felt like slayer ending better

vote-Slayer

[mal diction]

Were brothers in arms in this rap scene, often at shows as a tag team but with that said
I’m getting sick of having to carry ya bag so next time I’ll wrap one of those around ur head

LOL

You'll know who's the chief when I catch you asleep n brutally rape your booty crease,
You aint nothing but food to me, you'll get this foot long through ya back door like Uber eats

PAUSE... lol


i gotta give this battle to Slayerr... came harder than i've see him come i the past

v-slayerr

[MV]

I liked both bars this week. but i liked one more than the other. Slayerr your set-up and lead up were fire. the pay was however didnt do it for me. Im not saying it wasn't good, im saying that everything leading up to it IMO was setting up for a crazy haymaker and it just reached a plateau, this one had so much potential as it looked to be a legit personal. Bags on the other hand using the word combination booty crease is hilarious, and you took the closer to a place that i think was both risky and uneasy for most readers.


v/Bag

[miracle]

slay wins