WK 9:CONTENDER MATCH-> Exalted. (4-0) vs Kill Spree (6-1) (SPREE WINS)

[miracle]

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Regular Battle
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@Spree
@Exalted.
Winner will face @Art. next week for the championship

[Spree]

Exalted Aka Saint Aka Doc Savage

don't try the nicest. ur cryin was a prior crisis
Ur god of the whine. and ur a Baby? I bet u identify w/ Dionysus

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...light=Dionysus

mortal vs Greek God. every jewel of urs gettin robbed b
stomp wu head like wine making & while he Dionysus looted from his body

Exalted is the only viewer of that battle in the last 6 months…


Well look @ yoooouuu…
I smash pussy, women say I fuck hot & give’me neck right
Any heat you get from Muff on paper? Is stealing HIS concepts on a text site
Online 24/7, bredrin… ur suicide note equipped to be gas
B4 you kill yourself, please stay logged in…& keep boosting RB’s activity stats
I got rounds that smash dudes! Blick off the hip’ll spray 10
If you see a guy in Doc Range? He’s engaging wit gay men
& this faggot never get foul mouth, I ain’t lying friends
BUT we’ll see excursive he loses, & hope he never speaks his mind again

OH THERES MORE
https://i.ibb.co/QrMkJhP/IMG-4387.png
See Saint…
I grew up hangin with homies, riding bikes, playing in the sand, wow…
You grew up playing tag w/adults but everyone had their pants down
I got hard working hands, callus count cash bro
This depressed fuck a knuckle dragger, & that’s what your uncles called your ass hole
I’ll end on this note, your a faggot who’s got the up on us fakes
Cos he’s be sexually active longer than us, he got fucked when he was 8

[Exalted.]

Inb4 fake cord personals aka bomb bard

Congrats champing RB w/only a few. u've controlled it for views
U had a Miracle in SAP......'ing the life outta everyone who read & voted for you
Pretend it's an epic verse we all saw ur weakness after the fight
Yo, how'a Kill-ease into the role of a Hero when there's nothing Illiads to the site?
Talentwise shits a bore. & doesn't compare what it been before
Netcees was a Hotbed.... Spree sleepin on rusty nails shivering on frigid floors
DM'in for bars you're quick to use/bad wordplays sent from Blue
Idk what you Rotor put a spin on trying to simulate a force like a Centrifuge
Clap cheeks like Kevin. ahhhh NO i'm not gay or have an issue
Macs the menu.1 Buccal have u digging metal out from ya facial fatty tissue
Shove a grenade down ur throat, the implosion will spray vitals
Faggot.. what I pack-in to launch'll show ya system off like day 1 game titles
Show up to your funeral w/ munitions; fam won't get involved
Bullets got names i'll list 'em off while they're dodging the service like chickenhawks

[daveDILLY]

damn, exalted name right at the bottom saying he read it
lol you guilty af
sprees first bar hit hard lol the personal with the facts makes it hard good shit
logging off was weak
i liked the gay man bar
ex curse was alrt
last 3 bars were harsh, cud of been a little stronger but still hit
kinda sad lol

ex started out ok
kill ease was cool
hotbed didnt do it for me
i dont no what sent from blue means or if that ties in but
the rotor wordplay was cool im just not liking how it was displayed
i liked the buccal line the whole bar tied in well
pack in line was ok
closer was to wordy for me
spree did more for me here good battle guys

winner spree

[Slayerr.]

Damn that herkulese illiad line was dope af. Best thing I’ve read on here inna long time. Other than that though I felt exs verse just had more misses than kills. I thought kill was pretty consistent bar to bar, he didn’t have anything close to the Hercules line though. If ex had another big hit or one or two less misses he would’ve taken this but I think kills consistency got him the w here

V/kill

[Mac]

Well look @ yoooouuu…
I smash pussy, women say I fuck hot & give’me neck right
Any heat you get from Muff on paper? Is stealing HIS concepts on a text site
Online 24/7, bredrin… ur suicide note equipped to be gas
B4 you kill yourself, please stay logged in…& keep boosting RB’s activity stats
& this faggot never get foul mouth, I ain’t lying friends
BUT we’ll see excursive he loses, & hope he never speaks his mind again
I grew up hangin with homies, riding bikes, playing in the sand, wow…
You grew up playing tag w/adults but everyone had their pants down

vs

Pretend it's an epic verse we all saw ur weakness after the fight
Yo, how'a Kill-ease into the role of a Hero when there's nothing Illiads to the site?
Clap cheeks like Kevin. ahhhh NO i'm not gay or have an issue
Macs the menu.1 Buccal have u digging metal out from ya facial fatty tissue
Shove a grenade down ur throat, the implosion will spray vitals
Faggot.. what I pack-in to launch'll show ya system off like day 1 game titles

this was generally a good read. Spree was generally more harsher, his bars actually were pretty aggressive, although the personals are a bit far fetched from whats in the screenshot, they were actually fire. Shame for Spree to peak on the site peak inactivity. I had to not quote some as I felt they might have been fake personals. There are a few from exalted I didn't quite get like centrifuge, hotbed, or hawks. these 3 I quoted are the best highlights

thanks y'all v/ spree

[hello there]

See this kinda shit is why you're not allowed to have friends on rap forums...

Pretend it's an epic verse we all saw ur weakness after the fight
Yo, how'a Kill-ease into the role of a Hero when there's nothing Illiads to the site?

DM'in for bars you're quick to use/bad wordplays sent from Blue
Idk what you Rotor put a spin on trying to simulate a force like a Centrifuge
^^^^ Rotor was sick but finished disappointing

Clap cheeks like Kevin. ahhhh NO i'm not gay or have an issue
Macs the menu.1 Buccal have u digging metal out from ya facial fatty tissue



Spree's didn't do much for me: The concept wasn't the same, and the rest of the punches were just meh.


Vote for mini Blue.

[Letterman]

Well look @ yoooouuu…
I smash pussy, women say I fuck hot & give’me neck right
Any heat you get from Muff on paper? Is stealing HIS concepts on a text site
& this faggot never get foul mouth, I ain’t lying friends
BUT we’ll see excursive he loses, & hope he never speaks his mind again
I’ll end on this note, your a faggot who’s got the up on us fakes
Cos he’s be sexually active longer than us, he got fucked when he was 8

vs

Pretend it's an epic verse we all saw ur weakness after the fight
Yo, how'a Kill-ease into the role of a Hero when there's nothing Illiads to the site?
DM'in for bars you're quick to use/bad wordplays sent from Blue
Idk what you Rotor put a spin on trying to simulate a force like a Centrifuge
Clap cheeks like Kevin. ahhhh NO i'm not gay or have an issue
Macs the menu.1 Buccal have u digging metal out from ya facial fatty tissue
Show up to your funeral w/ munitions; fam won't get involved
Bullets got names i'll list 'em off while they're dodging the service like chickenhawks

Spree: Excursive was fire. The Muff personal was cool. The sexually active since he was 8 line is the only one that I liked from that part. Wasn’t really feeling much else from the verse, RB’s activity stats was a little funny but I think it lacked impact as a punch.

Ex: Achilles bar was fire. Rotor was good. Buccal could’ve been worded better, but the punch is good. Chickenhawks was decent. Wasn’t really feeling the others but this is a pretty solid verse.

Overall I think Ex landed more and outside of the excursive bar, I don’t think Spree’s material matched the impact of the ones that Ex landed. Still a solid battle as a whole but i got Ex.

v/Ex

[Virbius]

A mixed bag from both. Exhalted was a bit better overall IMO. The Achilles line was fucking great.

Spree’s seemed kinda extra, I thought the personals harmed the writing as they came across as a bit desperate. I mean, Exhalted mentioned a Greek god which someone else mentioned before in a completely different context and with different wordplay? What of it?

Vote: Exhalted

[mal diction]

I grew up hangin with homies, riding bikes, playing in the sand, wow…
You grew up playing tag w/adults but everyone had their pants down

pants down was dope

vs.

DM'in for bars you're quick to use/bad wordplays sent from Blue
Idk what you Rotor put a spin on trying to simulate a force like a Centrifuge

Show up to your funeral w/ munitions; fam won't get involved
Bullets got names i'll list 'em off while they're dodging the service like chickenhawks
both almost did something


look this battle could have been better ... can tell yall did this last minute.. Ex's puns fell short ... i was feeling the wit of spree's verse more

v-spree

[miracle]

Kill-Opener n excursive… I didn’t like the last three to be honest… felt like u wrote this quick, I thought ur opener was strong hit
Ex-
Role of a hero, buccal, chickenhawks

I’m going with ex here, better verse, more creative.. buccal n chickenhawk were dope

Vote exalted













4-4 next vote wins

[MV]

I smash pussy, women say I fuck hot & give’me neck right
Any heat you get from Muff on paper? Is stealing HIS concepts on a text site
heat, these are always nearly fatal personals imho.
Online 24/7, bredrin… ur suicide note equipped to be gas
B4 you kill yourself, please stay logged in…& keep boosting RB’s activity stats
lol
I got rounds that smash dudes! Blick off the hip’ll spray 10
If you see a guy in Doc Range? He’s engaging wit gay men
ok
& this faggot never get foul mouth, I ain’t lying friends
BUT we’ll see excursive he loses, & hope he never speaks his mind again
dope np
I grew up hangin with homies, riding bikes, playing in the sand, wow…
You grew up playing tag w/adults but everyone had their pants down
this was fked up ..fire
I got hard working hands, callus count cash bro
This depressed fuck a knuckle dragger, & that’s what your uncles called your ass hole
lol damn
I’ll end on this note, your a faggot who’s got the up on us fakes
Cos he’s be sexually active longer than us, he got fucked when he was 8
didn like the closer

vs


Congrats champing RB w/only a few. u've controlled it for views
U had a Miracle in SAP......'ing the life outta everyone who read & voted for you
lol okay i like this
Pretend it's an epic verse we all saw ur weakness after the fight
Yo, how'a Kill-ease into the role of a Hero when there's nothing Illiads to the site?
dope
Talentwise shits a bore. & doesn't compare what it been before
Netcees was a Hotbed.... Spree sleepin on rusty nails shivering on frigid floors
lol
DM'in for bars you're quick to use/bad wordplays sent from Blue
Idk what you Rotor put a spin on trying to simulate a force like a Centrifuge
this had all the ingredients to be a haymaker but i dont think it was worded optimally. i think a slightly different finisher was needed. still good tho.
Clap cheeks like Kevin. ahhhh NO i'm not gay or have an issue
Macs the menu.1 Buccal have u digging metal out from ya facial fatty tissue
this was demented. i like it
Shove a grenade down ur throat, the implosion will spray vitals
Faggot.. what I pack-in to launch'll show ya system off like day 1 game titles
not feelings this one
Show up to your funeral w/ munitions; fam won't get involved
Bullets got names i'll list 'em off while they're dodging the service like chickenhawks
this was a dope concept.but the set up but the content didnt move me


i enjoyed this battle overall. i feel like Ex was more consistent. but he never really went into that haymaker zone that he needed, because of Spree's first bar literally catching someone feeding was some real detectve conan type shit. however spree's personal regarding his molestation were a not as harsh or funny or creative as i would have liked. he has 1 or 2 in there the rest just seemed mean without too much put into the angle. fatty tissue and achilles were nasssttyyy on the other hand. Rotor put a spit on was destined to be the haymaker that put you over but the finish was a bit lack luster. the thing i think that put spree in the lead for me is the unfinished/unpolished punches from ex. Ex had the creativity here but i feel like you missed something to bring this punches from a 5 or 6 to 9+. While i feel that Spree had some flap punches in there his haymakers made it for me.


v/Spree

[miracle]

spree wins