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    The Q

    It goes on n on like eternal life, internal stripes I’ve earned thru fights, my heart fought to depart thoughts of wicked and turn to lights,but dont get it twisted, I still kiss my fifth and flirt with nines for protecting me durin uncertain times, cuz in the Q cats’ll do dirt for lines, murders high, between 2-4 is the perfect time burglars shine, call um the perverted kind, cuz if the shit you wear is only worth a dime they still strip you bare so it’s worth their time, real shit, not the turds guys joke with so peep the words I’ve spoken and keep your third eye open, these clucks out here with there beaks and Birds Eye’s scopin know my streets n curbs but not the piece my girl likes totin, heats a birth right so creeps get burnt by toast when, my peeps get F’d wit, it’ll be a death wish, bitch,I’ll leave the hearse wide open

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    Re: The Q

    I enjoyed reading this and just thought of how it would sound being rapped and what kind of beat I would hear this on "my heart fought to depart thoughts of wicked and turn to lights,but dont get it twisted" I thought that was a dope line right there. I'm curious to know what is your fav part of your own rhyme here?

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    Thanks brother. Honestly prolly from keep your third eye open.

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    Re: The Q

    Yeah I like how it all came together good shit man

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    Re: The Q

    HELLO< SMOG

    i thougth this was a good, full of twists and turns for the reader to enjoy. I think this is because of your rapbattles.com exp/ AND I APPRECIATE YOu and your talent battling.. GOOD LUCK SMOG

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    Re: The Q

    Nice short vs
    The flow it smooth
    Keep up the good work
    Make it longer

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    dope rhymes...flow was good...you just need to structure your verse better...over all good shit
    im not sick...i control the disease
    i got llamas but not the ones that napoleon feeds
    even the most protected soldier can bleed
    me and you ain't nothing alike...we a whole different breed

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