Week 2 - Exalted (0-1) vs. MV (1-1) (NEXT VOTE WINS 3-3)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Punches due Saturday
Voting ends on Tuesday

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Exalted.
@MV

[Exalted.]

MV,

get belittled so much. I'll see you barely exist as never
can't measure Planck Length when I make u feel the smallest & scare u stiff forever

[MV]

WU you really think ex is cute, me to but I'm thinking his remains in a campfire
i want to see your dreams can go up in flames as you read this battle and watch ex pyre

[Baron Mynd]

I think quantum mechanics may be a bit too high brow for the RapBattles.com community, personally, but it looks like that’s what we’re having to deal with this week.

Aside from me perhaps missing something if MV is also known as Planck(?) it felt too left-field a concept to me.

Ex-pyre / expire was simpler, wording could have been a lot better but I definitely felt it more. Vote - MV

[Wuxia]

I have Saint here. The bar itself was sound enough, direct, and a solid punch. MV could have omitted or changed some parts of his bar to make it better and easier to read. For example:

WU you really think ex is cute, me to but I'm thinking his remains in a campfire
i want to see your dreams can go up in flames as you read this battle and watch ex pyre

WU you really think ex is cute, but i'll leave his remains in a campfire
i want to see your dreams go up in flames as you read this battle and watch ex pyre

I would have voted for that 2nd bar. There was just too much to read in the setup, and unnecessary words were added that lessened the impact of the bar. MV actually had the better bar in terms of creativity, I thought the Expire wordplay was dope. But Saint packaged his bar more efficiently, and even though I had to Google Planck Length, I have no problem using Google to learn about new things and concepts that escape me on first read.

v-Exalted

[Slayerr.]

Two decent punches here (I did have to Google Planck length) but I feel like MVs flip was more personal with the name flip. I’ve not seen ex pyre before either so I like the creativity. It was a lot less wordy than usual from him too. Overall this was a good battle but I think MVs was more personal and exs bar was a bit more generic and could’ve been dropped against anyone
V/MV

[Wuxia]

Up for more votes.

MV 2-1

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Up for more votes.

MV 2-1

[Diso]

Close

I dunno I guess depends on what u like

I thought expire is just kinda lazy, was decent with what u done with it but I just felt u could been a bit more creative. The other bar was creative, flowed better, had to Google it which Is something usually I'd vote against but here I preferred exalteds bar.

Vote ex

[Allen Knight]

This was close but I go Ex takin it, it was more creative an hit harder, MV wording was off here, the idea wasn't worded that hard hitting, concept was there. Props to both vote Ex.

[KnoXville.]

I Got MV by a cunt hair. Very close

[Bahriman]

Ex bar was cool but MV had an actual diss on ex name. He actually attacked his opponent as ex just through some generic bar at MV

MV wins shouldn't be this close

[Wuxia]

MV wins