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    Perfect guy

    Something about his personality,
    He has a perfect smile.
    They way he look,
    He has a perfect style.
    I can't stop looking at him while we have lunch,
    I love him so much.
    He's so fly compare to them other guys,
    He has amazing Green eyes.
    He always has a positive attitude,
    I got a good dude.

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    I meant to put this poem spot

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    I post this in open mic by mistake Can someone move this to poet spot
    Last edited by Lady Poet; October 19th, 2021 at 06:43 PM

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    Re: Perfect guy

    i will critique it on the way out..

    i do like this piece its delicate and feeling riden..

    thanks for the smile

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    Re: Perfect guy

    Thank you

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