2.. a number .. a group... more than 1 but not greater
2.. a number .. a group... more than 1 but not greater
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Ok. Ok then lol.
I get it. Just wish there was more to draw from though Elegant Elephant.
You've stated something clean and crisp but it's something we already know.
How about hitting us with something that's new to our imagination in a way that's fresh.
I like the basic aspect of what you've said, but it's not abstract, it's not worded in a poetic way imo,
it's purely a fact.
come on....hit me with some poetic grace. Hit me with some imagery. Hit me with some golden nuggets of wisdom.
I know you've got it in you. So ..... bring it and let's read it.
: )
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... it's a hiaku.. what more do you expect?
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
me personally, something a little less one dimensional.Originally Posted by Elegant Elephant
But that's just me.
Others have their own opinions.
To each...their own.
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and too you
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
It may just be the weed, but I actually dig that line! It's not a Haiku, though I think you're aware of that and just trying to piss Emily off! It's a clever delivery of the notion of independence and self determination, as well as the idea that though humans need other humans for survival and 'happiness' that the individual is often regarded as secondary, hence fashion, religion, education propagating uniformed opinion and even so far as physical expectations in our aesthetics or haicuts etc...
My point being, even though you were trying to be a cunt, you ACCIDENTALLY wrote something profound haha
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^You're like those people that find jesus in burnt toast.
^ LMAO it was him I tell you! HIM!
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