BG RND 2: Rich Porter vs Dia [Rich wins]

[KnowP]

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BLAZING GROUNDS ROUND ONE
RULES

10 Lines MIN
12 Lines MAX

Check In's Due by WEDNESDAY, June 29TH by 11:59PM EST
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@Dia @Cred @Rich Porter

[Rich Porter]

Cash.

[Stranger]

hi..........

[Rich Porter]

Now when nobody knows who you are lame @Dia

u ain't a threat it's known. battling in FL but not 1 oz of respect is owned
cus u're heating up.. but just ain't bringing Flames like an electric stove
pussy, mouth and ass ur bitch just gasps when I'm all in her frame
Dog I'm in and out ALL them holes like a wack-a-mole carnival game
Dia ain't a goon he cud barely fight. rob me and it'll be a scary sight
try to kick in my door n get Lit Up on the Porch.. that's a sensor light
I cuffed ur chick chillin at ur crib. u'd look away and she'd often smile
I guess I'm a Backstabber.. bro ur bitch loves gettin nailed Doggy style
he got the slimest luck, always home while his girl's out gettin fucked
living that Oregon State bench player lifestyle.. faggot jus a sittin Duck

[Spree]

Rich posted 10 @dia

[Stranger]

punches? nothing portland is a blazer, pinned up against me you're subject to an early fate.
cuz after this, you'll be able to wave at god, and fist bump him when ur at the pearly gate.
dying? plan it! because you're about to take a casualty, in your verses, the fallacies spread.
rich is gay with strings attached, guys always plugging into port, like their galaxies dead.
this's a get rich quick scheme, was going to wait till friday, but I'll eject this herb now.
this is the farthest your going to get, usually rich have `3` of everything, except the `third` round.
he's soft as fuck with punches, this dick needs Cialis, because nothing he's bringing is hard.
you called knowp a janitor, bitch custodians, aint suppose to be washing & hanging ya art.
you losing this, is gospil, only thing that makes you god like, is getting crucified by uppers.
you won't make it to the finals, with your bars...
you won't even make it in front of the semi's, like pussies trying to commit suicide by truckers.

Ur bars suck n u get paid minimum wage. That's far from freedom
Dog u only display greatness cus ur a custodian at an art museum

[Stranger]

@Killing Spree says open for votes when rich hasn't posted yet, you said he sent 10 or w/e.

[KnowP]

@Dia it's up now

[JEM.]

Rich Porter

u ain't a threat it's known. battling in FL but not 1 oz of respect is owned
cus u're heating up.. but just ain't bringing Flames like an electric stove
Not bad.

pussy, mouth and ass ur bitch just gasps when I'm all in her frame
Dog I'm in and out ALL them holes like a wack-a-mole carnival game
lol... I laughed. good.

Dia ain't a goon he cud barely fight. rob me and it'll be a scary sight
try to kick in my door n get Lit Up on the Porch.. that's a sensor light
Meh, pretty good. I could see this being better received said in person

I cuffed ur chick chillin at ur crib. u'd look away and she'd often smile
I guess I'm a Backstabber.. bro ur bitch loves gettin nailed Doggy style
haha, dope.

he got the slimest luck, always home while his girl's out gettin fucked
living that Oregon State bench player lifestyle.. faggot jus a sitting Duck
Eh, didn't like it... Plus, Oregon State's mascot are the beavers.

Dia

punches? nothing portland is a blazer, pinned up against me you're subject to an early fate.
cuz after this, you'll be able to wave at god, and fist bump him when ur at the pearly gate.
Loved the set up, the punch was underwhelming... But still good.

dying? plan it! because you're about to take a casualty, in your verses, the fallacies spread.
rich is gay with strings attached, guys always plugging into port, like their galaxies dead.
Okay.

this's a get rich quick scheme, was going to wait till friday, but I'll eject this herb now.
this is the farthest your going to get, usually rich have `3` of everything, except the `third` round.
Not bad!

he's soft as fuck with punches, this dick needs Cialis, because nothing he's bringing is hard.
you called knowp a janitor, bitch custodians, aint suppose to be washing & hanging ya art.
Eh, not good... The setup was really bad (I saw Cialis lines 10 years ago) and the personal was okay.

you losing this, is gospil, only thing that makes you god like, is getting crucified by uppers.
you won't make it to the finals, with your bars...
you won't even make it in front of the semi's, like pussies trying to commit suicide by truckers.
Poorly worded and developed concept.

v/Rich.

Conceptually, Dia, may have been on-par with Rich but the execution was flawed. I vote for Rich for a more enjoyable and better written lines. Good battle guys.

[War Shack]

This was an ok battle. Rich had nice wording. I liked his first 3 bars. Thought those hit the most. Dia had the galaxy bar. Other bars could have hit a bit better as well but imo you over word them. Took away from the sting of the punch

Vote Rich Porter

[Stranger]

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[Phalanx]

u ain't a threat it's known. battling in FL but not 1 oz of respect is owned
cus u're heating up.. but just ain't bringing Flames like an electric stove
This was pretty nice. Really good execution.
pussy, mouth and ass ur bitch just gasps when I'm all in her frame
Dog I'm in and out ALL them holes like a wack-a-mole carnival game
I've said it before. "Fuckin yo girl" concepts bore me. This was mild at best..
Dia ain't a goon he cud barely fight. rob me and it'll be a scary sight
try to kick in my door n get Lit Up on the Porch.. that's a sensor light
This was alright. Decent jab
I cuffed ur chick chillin at ur crib. u'd look away and she'd often smile
I guess I'm a Backstabber.. bro ur bitch loves gettin nailed Doggy style
Again, a "fucking yo girl" concept. This was a lot less effective then the previous one.
he got the slimest luck, always home while his girl's out gettin fucked
living that Oregon State bench player lifestyle.. faggot jus a sittin Duck
I know what you meant. You meant Oregon, as opposed to Oregon State. Unfortunately...I can't give you credit for what you meant, only what you write. Swing and a miss.

punches? nothing portland is a blazer, pinned up against me you're subject to an early fate.
cuz after this, you'll be able to wave at god, and fist bump him when ur at the pearly gate.
This was pretty mild. Nothing really witty about it, unless I'm missing a personal.
dying? plan it! because you're about to take a casualty, in your verses, the fallacies spread.
rich is gay with strings attached, guys always plugging into port, like their galaxies dead.
Kind of stretched, so the excessive wording takes away from the sting. Dope concept though, still lands.
this's a get rich quick scheme, was going to wait till friday, but I'll eject this herb now.
this is the farthest your going to get, usually rich have `3` of everything, except the `third` round.
This was a pretty lack luster nameflip. Your excessive wording + a bland concept is not the equation for success.
he's soft as fuck with punches, this dick needs Cialis, because nothing he's bringing is hard.
you called knowp a janitor, bitch custodians, aint suppose to be washing & hanging ya art.
Not feeling the set up. Pretty played. But I like that your attempting to double punch. The quote flip was poorly executed though. If your going to flip a line...it needs to be doper then the one your flipping.
you losing this, is gospil, only thing that makes you god like, is getting crucified by uppers.
you won't make it to the finals, with your bars...
you won't even make it in front of the semi's, like pussies trying to commit suicide by truckers.
Holy sheep shit bat man. This bar was stretched. The part I bolded could have been nixed, as it adds nothing to the Bar. The ending concept was pretty good though, but excessive wording limits it to being a jab.

Bar vs Bar Comparison -

Bar One - Rich Porter
Bar Two - Dia
Bar Three - Rich Porter
Bar Four - Tie
Bar Five - Diasick

Pretty close. But for me the better execution will almost always prevail. And it's because of better execution, I have Rich edging this.

Vote - Rich Porter
Pe

[Sparkicity]

Rich Porter's Verse.

u ain't a threat it's known. battling in FL but not 1 oz of respect is owned
cus u're heating up.. but just ain't bringing Flames like an electric stove
Good opening bars to start off the round.
pussy, mouth and ass ur bitch just gasps when I'm all in her frame
Dog I'm in and out ALL them holes like a wack-a-mole carnival game
This to me was a jab than a haymaker. It landed though.
Dia ain't a goon he cud barely fight. rob me and it'll be a scary sight
try to kick in my door n get Lit Up on the Porch.. that's a sensor light
Another jab landed. You're keeping consistent though.
I cuffed ur chick chillin at ur crib. u'd look away and she'd often smile
I guess I'm a Backstabber.. bro ur bitch loves gettin nailed Doggy style
Not really a bar I fuck with, concept was there.
he got the slimest luck, always home while his girl's out gettin fucked
living that Oregon State bench player lifestyle.. faggot jus a sittin Duck
You're pushing way too much on the girl angle, forcing it. So this brought you down.

Vs.

Dia's Verse.

punches? nothing portland is a blazer, pinned up against me you're subject to an early fate.
cuz after this, you'll be able to wave at god, and fist bump him when ur at the pearly gate.
The setup was doing fine but the punch didn't land as you wanted it too.
dying? plan it! because you're about to take a casualty, in your verses, the fallacies spread.
rich is gay with strings attached, guys always plugging into port, like their galaxies dead.
Good jab. A different build-up would have turned it into a haymaker but I liked this.
this's a get rich quick scheme, was going to wait till friday, but I'll eject this herb now.
this is the farthest your going to get, usually rich have `3` of everything, except the `third` round.
Hmm. I'm trying to understand, the three of everything, and third round part I liked. I actually thought you were going to use a Get Rich or Die Trying movie scheme. That would have been cool for some wordplay, and nameflips.
he's soft as fuck with punches, this dick needs Cialis, because nothing he's bringing is hard.
you called knowp a janitor, bitch custodians, aint suppose to be washing & hanging ya art.
Oooh. Wax on, wax off.
you losing this, is gospil, only thing that makes you god like, is getting crucified by uppers.
you won't make it to the finals, with your bars...
you won't even make it in front of the semi's, like pussies trying to commit suicide by truckers
If you took out the middle bar, would have done way better. It looks like a filler but the semi's, and trucker's bar was a good jab.

Alright. Good battle by both with good bars. A lot of tension from what I've read, and some shit was good. I'm going to call it a close battle, maybe debatable but if I had to choose one, I might give it to Rich just because of his performance, and execution. Dia had some good material but the delivery is what set him back in my opinion.

- - - Updated - - -

Vote: Rich Porter.

I forgot that part out.

[Notti]

u ain't a threat it's known. battling in FL but not 1 oz of respect is owned
cus u're heating up.. but just ain't bringing Flames like an electric stove
cool, creative jab
pussy, mouth and ass ur bitch just gasps when I'm all in her frame
Dog I'm in and out ALL them holes like a wack-a-mole carnival game
not feeling this, corny imo
Dia ain't a goon he cud barely fight. rob me and it'll be a scary sight
try to kick in my door n get Lit Up on the Porch.. that's a sensor light
ahh, i like this gritty shit. got that live battle feel, good wording
I cuffed ur chick chillin at ur crib. u'd look away and she'd often smile
I guess I'm a Backstabber.. bro ur bitch loves gettin nailed Doggy style
not a fan of this, feels played to me and lacks sting
he got the slimest luck, always home while his girl's out gettin fucked
living that Oregon State bench player lifestyle.. faggot jus a sittin Duck
nice closer, creative and good wording

vs

punches? nothing portland is a blazer, pinned up against me you're subject to an early fate.
cuz after this, you'll be able to wave at god, and fist bump him when ur at the pearly gate.
other then the wp in the opener and the smooth wording to make it flow, this didn't rlly punch at all
dying? plan it! because you're about to take a casualty, in your verses, the fallacies spread.
rich is gay with strings attached, guys always plugging into port, like their galaxies dead.
this was a good punch, wording was even good enuff to make it hit
this's a get rich quick scheme, was going to wait till friday, but I'll eject this herb now.
this is the farthest your going to get, usually rich have `3` of everything, except the `third` round.
not feeling this, maybe i missed something?
he's soft as fuck with punches, this dick needs Cialis, because nothing he's bringing is hard.
you called knowp a janitor, bitch custodians, aint suppose to be washing & hanging ya art.
this didn't hit for me either. not just the wording, but there was not actual concept to build a solid punch on
you losing this, is gospil, only thing that makes you god like, is getting crucified by uppers.
you won't make it to the finals, with your bars...
you won't even make it in front of the semi's, like pussies trying to commit suicide by truckers.
this was actually good because it was funny as fuck. didn't expect it at all, it was creative and worded funny

Overall- Rich had an up and down verse, literally. I liked bars 1,3,5 and disliked 2,4. so overall he was more consistent then not. Dia showed improvement from last week. 2 punches i felt had solid concepts with ok wording and the opener i liked the wording but not the concept. decent battle, but easy to decide the winner here.

v/Rich Porter