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Thread: My rap...

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    Re: My rap...

    lot'a freeposting goin on here lol

    anyways... first thing is I could tell by the length of it, it wouldn't be rounded, and I was pretty much right, you could have give it the impact it needed with a more dynamic rhyme scheme, it was all too 'standard' rhyming, get more into the schemes, that'd be my advice

    keep at it bro

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    Re: My rap...

    Thanks for the constructive crit, I appreciate! @DEV
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