I dont need 10 lines to get on his nerve
you suck at everything you do according to your verse
this guy thinks he is hard to play
but he is as pussy as ray
why can't you just suck a motherfucking dick
cuz in you block the whole neighbours has fucked your chick
really stop that rap and get a job
go to king burger to meat mr.bob
shit you got me piss off now son
the next time i see you around .. i'll back hand slap you face.. done
:gats:L.Y.R.I.C.A.L S.W.O.R.D
so you're a 'lyrical sword' - to tell you the truth, i don't feel troubled,
i'm spitting big bars, you just dribblin' the bubbles,
and i'm poppin' em, taking you to the cleaners,
your men? my army's droppin' 'em, turnin' them into screamers,
they leave us, it's just you and me now,
you dropped rhyming couplets like - how can i say? - a girl,
i hurl, cause i'm ill - sicker than you are, prick,
you're physically wrong but still get me ticked,
from beginning to end, your piece was missing atleast wit,
p.s. the only thing you backhand is your one inch dick.
HAHAHA you make me laugh Elizabeth
Cuz I know you dropped you best written Mr.seth
Why would you talk about army and include penis?
shit you're the type that fingers your anus
Fuck that's gross my son cuz in reality
you're a homeless fuck face plus I shit on your family
why brag about somethin' you can't do
Only time you're better than me is in your dreams.. Clue
It's true.. fist me one on one and I'll flash your face
Call me Bully cuz I just ate your plate..
:gats:L.Y.R.I.C.A.L S.W.O.R.D
ok ok heres how i'll start
i'mma break your heart
call me mr hemp
your back hand is weak
i'll show how to hit like a pimp
not the whore im selling
knock your ass on the ground
run you down
then back over reserve
you no more than a schoolyard bully
i gave the last one brain damage, nows his lying snug in his wooly
you call yourself a lyrical sword
but with your lyrics im bored.
i run this fucking town.
bitch i'll show you why this is my crown
Dude you suck.. and you Avi tells it...
why write lot when you can't spell it...
I see no diss in what you called diss...
do me a favor and go live with them fish...
I'm weak but you're weaker...
That crown you own is made of paper...
I'll use it as a the toilet roller...
Fill it up with shit them make you eat it...
I own the gold crown and you bow down...
change your rhymes cuz there have no sound...
:gats:L.Y.R.I.C.A.L S.W.O.R.D
Lyrical sword, your really a boring slut and nothing that u rap is tight
Your rapping aight, but ur transitions are as bad as hermaphrodites
Like your 1 syllable rhyme scheme, they dry as beach balls without visine
My vice tightening, take my advice, take a night expand ur thought; widescreen
Dope shit is way out of your league...but u got little buzz out of the weed
Its probably just me your style doesnt add to ur hype, its just way under me
blah
"the ink of a scholar, is worth a thousand times more, than the blood of a martyr"--lupe fiasco
"I'm sonnin' ya'll like father's day/disrespect pop and get popped like Marvin Gaye" Skillz
WRITTEN VOICES
krytical your pitiful but fuck that your shits obscurely sewn
kids overtly prone to being nothing..
......like the talent that his words have shown
youre worthless though..
cause youre played out im rare like moon rocks
this goon stops and thinks of boats when i tell em go back to the boondocks
who's hot? go find a mirror and show yourself whos not
yeah you thought...
but you wouldnt be a problem if you were mathematic exam
better yet you wouldnt be a monster if you came in a can
or even if you were a dinosaur right in front of japan
youre just a confused bitch who thinks she could be a man
im awkward on purpose because i hate people
follow me on twitter: @NobleCAM_JR
I'll serve all of above me just to prove who's fake
no mistake my flows served cold just like rice cake
noble's wack text flow show's he's a no go
and when he spit we walk off like his Toad Stool logo
Kritical's ability is far from lyrical my spits a go
hit his flows and turn his bars to ceral*
lyrical swords typical animation visuals lets me know
that these 4-4's Shall end (shoaling) his temple's
Shootah!! will never shoot you its just to amuse you
he's only used to seeing shells when he pukes cheesy Kraft noodles
you dudes doo doo and now Restructor is here from you tube trying to claim his bars isn't recognizable but their completely see threw
We Hogg Tie'n em up cause these niggaz is full of beef we just fryn..em up
You talk about crap in ya rap
I talk about facts in mine
You all know its my time to shine
hustle everyday stayin on my grind
like tony hawk anyone readin this can suck my cock
may not be the next tupac but everyone sayin "zack you rock"
i rock the mic all you others will never no what its like
to be a genius, to have fortune an fame
in the rap game snortin cocaine with the insane
full head a hair i got that dude needs rogain
i gain respect you'll see my name at the top
you think not ill flop my cock on your chin
an watch ur face cringe while i go on an addy binge
Last edited by zg25; July 26th, 2011 at 02:14 PM
Your flow is terrible, did you write it in a coloring book?
Oh wait, your not smart enough to spell,sorry I was mistook.
How dare you try to challenge anyone in here, you're not on the level,
Your against good flows, lyricism, and skill so they call you a rebel.
Your just a mad faggot who never made it, and washed up on a forum,
It's the internet, if people read your shit, they'd be dying of boredom.
Give up, go away, make some milk and cookies.
That way you got good news and bad news, rookie.
I'm back bitches!
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my words are explosions, everything that comes out my mouth is a prolific statement,
like... "I feel like giving into my emotions, and slammin b.nutz head onto the pavement"
if you think you know the game, lets get back to basics,
i'll give you 2 left jabs, a right, and an uppercut to result in a permanent face lift,
it's play shit, i'll hit you so hard it'll make you wobble like your wasted,
contemplatin on where to leave your dead body decayin,
either in a trunk, trash can, or deep in the basement
Prolific, ur far from terrific take that verse an stick it
up ur ass, ur a faget like that whos dick is always shit packin
as im stackin loot, ur wearin a gay ass suit while a dudes takin a poop
on ur chest, fairy mofucker tare in that dudes asshole,
im sure this wont be the last pole u suck so goodluck u gay fuck
I'll spill ur blood on the carpet, bitch your retarded,
can't believe that you started a war with an artist,
so physically fit, equipped with bottomless clips,
rockets attached to my hips, c4, chetties n shit,
go ahead n attack, i'm well n ready for that
i'll shoot you once in the head , n twice in the back
The restructor rhymes like an ass hole pucker
runnin from the flames as i light up his cypher
I see your a rookie your first time in the hood
your all ate up like jerky sayin its all good
your rhymes are shit and you lack any whit
get a f#@*%n grip pick a spot and just sit
lets take a vote your bout as smooth as grit
with writing as sloppy as french arm pit
So with this hit I hope you get the hint
your f#@*n spent and your hottest round didnt make a dent
Rookie you may be, names zackary g
all you fagets can hate me, but ya cant beat me
in a rap,Flipped ur a pussy, think you need a cat nap
Purr all day thinkin to urself, why am i so gay?,
maybe cuz you scare all the bitches away with ur ugly face,
yo bro stop rappin, maybe take up bein a dj cuz ur raps are like the color grey,
Dull as fuck, you like the wood like a woodchuck
you would suck dick for pennies, even give out freebies
weekly, you a freak for the pee pee, ya like dick in ya mouth,
to you it tastes yummy, fuckin try me bitch, ill make ya face all bloody
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