1st Time

[ThtGurlUKno]

I know it's not great I just want some input
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I speak fast and slick/ but I'm not a jive nikka
more of a/ ride-or-die chick nikka
a princess with tomboy slang/say things sicker
than AIDS in the 90's/ everybody wonder why
we still say things/that demote us back to slave days
It's cuz the wounds haven't healed/ so we still feel oppressed
An articulate nikka will impress/every white person
that comes in the room/ ask the Black Panthers
how it feels to be screwed/or even better
ask a Nam vet whether/ he's happy to be home
where everyone hates him, and no one
is even gonna make a move/ to thank him

[Extinctor Draconis]

i don't get why people post before reading the rules

[Heart break Andy]

Decent. Ima syllable man so id like to see you sit with it more people also taught me writing like that will throw the reader off Try to word as if you were just saying it instead of typing to put it out there I hope to see more from you pm me any time bless!