Barbaric Intellect

[_Lyrics]

Barbaric Intellect
By bobericc and Ntalek


yo...
deaths on the rise, asking whats left when you've died
what if this happens? distracting the rest of your lives..
my wisdom is wise, why tribute a breathing living shrine
squeezing pesticides in redened eyes? believe your trepanized
barbaric minds will terrorize, here forever and ever
severing killers, and murder like dexter, but better
crime scene near MIT, the death rap takes the form of three walls
like a death trap, where I seek gold in key molds of set backs
too many regrets to step past, and evolve from a brutal nature
any truth to this in a world of duplicate's? and who's a savior?
suited capers, invaders of privacy, while any money tempts assets,
security used to be exacted by big axes incase anybody tresspasses
these sick bastards can fire 1280 rounds to burn dumb brutes
but never know the year albertus magnus mentioned the first gun use
with this thirst-blood soothes, act like it's not an aquired taste
behind a cities violence rates, everyone knows what they tryna take
what of themselves they trying to make? stalk fear and give respect
stop it and then accept anger as a part of your barbaric intellect..
.
.
I kill shit with realness when my veralized steel spits
it rips ligaments off of your feeble figurings.
Painting visions with pens barbaric imagery
dismembering any remains or remembrance
of the incident you've presented it's
no time for closed minds kill shit
like closed mines in 09.
What direction are we headed in? The
signs of the times with a black president
to clean up ol' whiteys negligence
and barbaricly intellectual intelligence
which killed more than several men
in catastrohies when's the rockets red blare
in the righteous name of blasphemy.
50 replicas of a gasy seed to blast your greed
still couldn't surpase the need cause on the
other side the grass is green.
But now adays cow's don't even use grass to feed.
Living in a world were even animals are scared to eat
and it's a buck higher to buy an organic treat.
Healthy livings not a giving when your given
half the shit thats listed on the menu.
88% corn and soy juice
it takes a barbaric intellect to enjoy food.


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[Esoteric Fortune]

my wisdom is wise, why tribute a breathing living shrine
squeezing pesticides in redened eyes? believe your trepanized
this was dope..sick wordplay

too many regrets to step past, and evolve from a brutal nature
any truth to this in a world of duplicate's? and who's a savior?
dope..your wordplay is very clever

This over all was dope 10/10. Your wordplay was on Par and your vocabulary is well-rounded. The rhyme schemes were creative and your flow was all around dope.
Well Done bro.

[Ntalek]

appreciated ups...leave links.

[MC Fatal]

That went dope as hell.

[XM]

Dope shit, diggin the vocab, the message as well, flow was on fuck'n point nice way to control the syllable count I might add, yall should have thrown a picture up to top it off, mot much to really say other then this is the best thing i've read in the last week or so, your still gay tho lol

Fav lines:
too many regrets to step past, and evolve from a brutal nature
any truth to this in a world of duplicate's? and who's a savior?

my wisdom is wise, why tribute a breathing living shrine
squeezing pesticides in redened eyes? believe your trepanized

barbaric minds will terrorize, here forever and ever
severing killers, and murder like dexter, but better

I kill shit with realness when my veralized steel spits
it rips ligaments off of your feeble figurings.
Painting visions with pens barbaric imagery
dismembering any remains or remembrance
of the incident you've presented it's
no time for closed minds kill shit
like closed mines in 09.
What direction are we headed in? The
signs of the times with a black president
to clean up ol' whiteys negligence
and barbaricly intellectual intelligence
which killed more than several men
in catastrohies when's the rockets red blare
in the righteous name of blasphemy.
50 replicas of a gasy seed to blast your greed
still couldn't surpase the need cause on the
other side the grass is green.
But now adays cow's don't even use grass to feed.
Living in a world were even animals are scared to eat
and it's a buck higher to buy an organic treat.
Healthy livings not a giving when your given
half the shit thats listed on the menu.
88% corn and soy juice
it takes a barbaric intellect to enjoy food.

^^Yeah this was epic lmao

[Ntalek]

appreciated ups...

[Wise Ways]

this was pretty nice.. to different approaches to this subject.. bob sorta took the old fashioned route and described shit from back in the day it seemed like.. flow was on point, made some good points.. i felt wording in some places could have been improved and was forced alittle but whatever..talek, your part kind of started out similar to bob's but then switched over.. the flow was cool and you made some good points.. nice job fellas..

too many regrets to step past, and evolve from a brutal nature
any truth to this in a world of duplicate's? and who's a savior?
suited capers, invaders of privacy, while any money tempts assets,
security used to be exacted by big axes incase anybody tresspasses

^my favorite line from bob

50 replicas of a gasy seed to blast your greed
still couldn't surpase the need cause on the
other side the grass is green.
But now adays cow's don't even use grass to feed.

^fav. talek line..

[Android]

deaths on the rise, asking whats left when you've died
what if this happens? distracting the rest of your lives..
my wisdom is wise, why tribute a breathing living shrine
squeezing pesticides in redened eyes? believe your trepanized
barbaric minds will terrorize, here forever and ever
severing killers, and murder like dexter, but better
crime scene near MIT, the death rap takes the form of three walls
like a death trap, where I seek gold in key molds of set backs
too many regrets to step past, and evolve from a brutal nature
any truth to this in a world of duplicate's? and who's a savior?
suited capers, invaders of privacy, while any money tempts assets,
security used to be exacted by big axes incase anybody tresspasses
these sick bastards can fire 1280 rounds to burn dumb brutes
but never know the year albertus magnus mentioned the first gun use
with this thirst-blood soothes, act like it's not an aquired taste
behind a cities violence rates, everyone knows what they tryna take
what of themselves they trying to make? stalk fear and give respect
stop it and then accept anger as a part of your barbaric intellect..

This was pretty good, it flowed really well. Some parts I thought could have been re-worded. Eg; the second line 'distracting' just seemed in the wrong context I thought. There was a few others such as the second to last line but I think you get what I mean so I won't point the others out. However this was well-rounded in all other aspects I thought. Imagery and plot were decent. Keep it up.

I kill shit with realness when my veralized steel spits
it rips ligaments off of your feeble figurings.
Painting visions with pens barbaric imagery
dismembering any remains or remembrance
of the incident you've presented it's
no time for closed minds kill shit
like closed mines in 09.
What direction are we headed in? The
signs of the times with a black president
to clean up ol' whiteys negligence
and barbaricly intellectual intelligence
which killed more than several men
in catastrohies when's the rockets red blare
in the righteous name of blasphemy.
50 replicas of a gasy seed to blast your greed
still couldn't surpase the need cause on the
other side the grass is green.
But now adays cow's don't even use grass to feed.
Living in a world were even animals are scared to eat
and it's a buck higher to buy an organic treat.
Healthy livings not a giving when your given
half the shit thats listed on the menu.
88% corn and soy juice
it takes a barbaric intellect to enjoy food.

This was also good, the style switch seemed strange at first but I got used to it the second time I read through lol. Firstly I find myself wondering why the word 'the' is on the 8th line in and not the 9th. But this stanza was packed with multi's which helped it to flow better, without them I think it would have been a lot less enjoyable, also I think the connection between the 1st and 2nd stanzas was just okay. Keep it up.

[Ntalek]

appreciated..tops.

[Stripez]

str8 drop cuz...shit was real