thanks for voting sic...UPPIN^^^
thanks for voting sic...UPPIN^^^
presentation says it all ya fucking fake so dude quit with the bluffin
if your bragging about how sick you are bitch better be close to the coughin
meh wordplay
I’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
delivery wasnt there imo but ok
You think your punches are so original but I suggest you soon stop it
cuz every concept you think of is fresh until the moment you drop it
witty
your just a snack ready to be eaten and shitted like a food expo
I don’t know shit about construction but I’ll wear a hard hat and bulldoze
lol personal
were doing community service when reading his lines, “below” average
cuz everything we see about flow is either recycled or garbage
bad rhyme
vs
this comic turnes bitch like a sex switch situation, dna test proves hes known as a feminine
Call the Tranni immigration, im deportin this fake pussy quicker than an arizona mexican
bad bad bad
like the missin photo in his year book, this dudes not worth the mention
his click is composed of fake dicks, ive named them the dildo convention
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it seems ive lost track of time, like missin hands on the clock
So i gave his neck a break~fast but late, though still left this jack in the box
bad wording
i hear in texas they hold him, but this queen just gets lucky with flops i figure
clubbed him for diamonds on 4th street, no heart so this joker gets dropped in the river
eh
my verse is potent poison, lyrical venom deteriorating his mental health
depression ensues, have em runnin to his house to richard jeni himself
v/comedian for better verse
I’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
VS
it seems ive lost track of time, like missin hands on the clock
So i gave his neck a break~fast but late, though still left this jack in the bo
OK battle. flowdoze had better flow and better lines but not by much. it was a close one tho.Comedian was not bad. really close battle.
damn cool i like it, really i dont know who to give ma vote to, cuz u both are good, well good luck. peace
I’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
vs
it seems ive lost track of time, like missin hands on the clock
So i gave his neck a break~fast but late, though still left this jack in the box
i hear in texas they hold him, but this queen just gets lucky with flops i figure
clubbed him for diamonds on 4th street, no heart so this joker gets dropped in the river
decent battle here but my vote for FlowDoze
RTF PLEZ!!
thanks for voting ya... UPPIN^^^
I’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
^best bar of the battle, pretty sick
were doing community service when reading his lines, “below” average
cuz everything we see about flow is either recycled or garbage
^ehh, not bad, didnt really rhyme though
vs
this comic turnes bitch like a sex switch situation, dna test proves hes known as a feminine
Call the Tranni immigration, im deportin this fake pussy quicker than an arizona mexican
^pretty good
it seems ive lost track of time, like missin hands on the clock
So i gave his neck a break~fast but late, though still left this jack in the box
^good
overall, i though FLOW did better, despite comedian having the best bar, he had some lines that didnt even rhyme, and FLOW came better overall.
v/FLOW
Uppin^^^
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vote flow,better flow and punches.Neither the comedians first or last bars even rhymed.Both verses were str8,but I was feelin floze a lil more.No hate
v=flodoze
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this was mediocre at best but comedian def did better...his lines seemed to be coherent...pumches were a little bit harder
thats the best line in the whole battleI’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
presentation says it all ya fucking fake so dude quit with the bluffin
if your bragging about how sick you are bitch better be close to the coughin
I’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
You think your punches are so original but I suggest you soon stop it
cuz every concept you think of is fresh until the moment you drop it
you had a few alright bars here homie
vs
i hear in texas they hold him, but this queen just gets lucky with flops i figure
clubbed him for diamonds on 4th street, no heart so this joker gets dropped in the river
hella streched, but ok attempt
V/The Comedian
hit this link or i'll never vote on any of your battles ever again....
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this comic turnes bitch like a sex switch situation, dna test proves hes known as a feminine
Call the Tranni immigration, im deportin this fake pussy quicker than an arizona mexican
(decent)
vs
I’m a serial killer put your mouth in the gat make you take a breather
And give you a cold shoulder with the rest of ya body parts in the freezer
(decent)
You think your punches are so original but I suggest you soon stop it
cuz every concept you think of is fresh until the moment you drop it
(alright)
vote: com
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