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The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
You wanna get the pictures involve? lol now you really done did it kid.
cuz everyone know's that microwave is about the same price as half your crib.
Okay
I told you bitch stop saying my name before my fist begin to play wit ya brain.
N it's funny how u call it cheap but not even ya insurance could pay 4 my chain.
Okay
I watch this dude and think is he serious? man fuck ya lines I ain't hearing it.
kid's calling me trailer trash but bitch your just straight trash...period.
Played concept
this is the end of ur career but congratz on being the biggest herb of the year.
your parents never loved u but if I said fuck ya pops then godofwar will appear.
Naw
this bitch will get poped like extacy so I dare you to tryda come next to me.
I swear I'll put a biscuit in your mouth faster than a fucking KFC recipe.
lol this made me laugh, cool
who the hell raised ya son? and I only call you dog cuz ya bars age like one.
so if your whats considered a shock then my new name should be tazer gun.
Nice lil swagger bar. Cool
I'll bring you death faster than a God Of War and maybe he should write your spits.
cuz you'll end up a deadpool like the nigga u argued with cuz he didn't like ya shit.
Damn dude... this was bad. You coulda made that SO much better... that actually annoyed me lol
we all dont like u stop jokin, when it comes to the game bet u are in it deep..throating.
ya respects like chuckie cheese cuz in order for u to earn points u need TOKEN.
I don't get this, something I missed probably so - No comment lol
but chill with liein cuz we no ya gay ass is Hulk and hulk is Cancerous.
but answer this why do mods see ur IP as ^^ your a BIGGER fake than pampas titts.
Not feeling
nigga I will ram ya chick, skeet on her ass and her titts, my balls will jam her lips.
she said I am the shit, and smoking cigratte's is only time she touches cancer's stick.
now THIS, was a decent line haha... dope
honestly I think you need love, so you can feel relaxed like a weed buzz.
cuz I been wit my girl for a minute and u mention me more than she does.
Not bad
-Well, this was definately not a bad diss. I havn't read Cancerous' very indepth but this just caught my eye and I remembered how much i owe you in terms of feed on shit. So I thought i'd take a decent look.
The flow is pretty cool throughout, there are occasional moments where it goes a lil choppy.. In my opinion, that little hook kinda thing at the end flowed badly.. might just be how I read it though.
There were occasional multies, but admittedly, nothing spectacular.
Finally, your punches. Well, there were 2 or 3 punches that i liked quiiiiite a lot lol. Cancer's stick line was a cool one. But then there were other punches that just left me like "erm.. damn that was bad." But it could just be personal opinion.
Now considering this is a diss piece, and not a battle verse, I'd of liked to see more swag lol... I love swag but i've never got the hang of swag concepts. So I havn't tried.
The Tazer gun line was probably a lil corny, but i liked it haha. Was cool shit
Nice diss piece, Some punches didn't reach the level of others but was pretty good all together.
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