A Textcee's Testimony

[Vallus]

I felt like writing something for pure content recently
Wasn't really stressin the flow etc.... enjoi nonetheless

Wrote it to a beat so it reads better with a beat going
than in silence......


I posted feedback in

ArchDeluxe - Girl Troubles
Luxury Lyrics 11 - Hip Hop Aeint Dead

You guys n gals take this shit way too serious, see
Why u write entire novels over a loss is a mystery B
I don't write text for records n shit, the effort is in
Hopes that I can get better than them, wether I win
Or not, there's no sorrow if I don't capture votes displayed
I just want to post better tommorow than I posted today
I do it for fun, & I do it for pleasure ya'll know it
Any positive FB I receive after I drop is just a bonus


This rap doesn't pay my bills or put food on my plate
But it sure passes my time here quickly
'till V can get back home to the states
People take this shit as serious business, and...
Fear losin like it was losin an appendage man
I don't care about hate votes, gay quotes n stuff
The bickering that ensues after they posts is up
This vote was wrong, he stole his shit...........
Then why the fuck were u just on his dick?
Unless you can rap better than V today
I wont respect a thing you say
Unless your here takin advice, needin to elevate

I guess my point in this, isn't that u pad for loads of wealth
But we pad for help, and for practice to stack below our belts
Like another notch in the leather, just watch me get better
Don't tryin stop me, hold me back, or pop a berretta
Well lyrically I mean, don't take the things people say to heart
This is just a webpage for starts, n based just to be a place for art
Nevermind the frivolous beef, people pissed in their seats
Don't let it hold you back from keyin a piece for rippin a sheet
Or a makin a thread that's potent man, fuck the boastin and
Vet's who act like their too far above people to hold a hand
To help people up the ladder, who come for postin
We all know after our steppin stones we found on our own
That half that ladders rungs were broken.......

[ArchDeluxe]

seems like all the good rappers on this site barely get feedback..

but this was nicee.. reminded me of Em's verse on Warrior Pt. 2

guess my point in this, isn't that u pad for loads of wealth
But we pad for help, and for practice to stack below our belts
Like another notch in the leather, just watch me get better
Don't tryin stop me, hold me back, or pop a berretta
Well lyrically I mean, don't take the things people say to heart
This is just a webpage for starts, n based just to be a place for art

^^^^^
being soo true made this part of the verse that much better

you're rly good and imma be uppin' this for u cuz people need to see it

[Cody Nash]

closed. no links. if you don't know what links are then read the rules.

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...670/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...049/index.html



opened.

[Vallus]

if u leave this open I'll give u 2 more links to use

[Baron Mynd]

Pretty cool little piece, feeling the flow on the first stanza the best, but then the content in the third stanza the most. Which was good, because you want to be looking to end on a high note. Some cool schemes and switch-ups which might go over a few heads here, I liked this section most:

Well lyrically I mean, don't take the things people say to heart
This is just a webpage for starts, n based just to be a place for art
Nevermind the frivolous beef, people pissed in their seats
Don't let it hold you back from keyin a piece for rippin a sheet
Or a makin a thread that's potent man, fuck the boastin and
Vet's who act like their too far above people to hold a hand

Too true.

Stay up fam,

- Deus

[MADDNES53]

hi. so heres what i thought
1) lose the intro the piece speaks for itself
2) there was a quality of self conciousness that i liked. this is a website. this is a forum, these raps arent paying bills etc.. you dont take yourself too seriously and that is defenitely a plus. a little reality never hurt anyone.
3) this is just an idea but a link to the beat would have been really useful, it would have helped to know specifically what you were going for

**check out ma post**
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...718/index.html

[BroKen]

Well lyrically I mean, don't take the things people say to heart
This is just a webpage for starts, n based just to be a place for art
Nevermind the frivolous beef, people pissed in their seats
Don't let it hold you back from keyin a piece for rippin a sheet
Or a makin a thread that's potent man, fuck the boastin and
Vet's who act like their too far above people to hold a hand

^^^ This was all true. I love the fact that it relates to shit I've gone through man. Good job and keep up with this dude. Don't stop.. Nice flow, originality, and it has that thing that I can relate to by reading it.

[The-Palestinian]

I liked the Flow and the topic of the piece was pretty nice I really liked you second verse espically the closure in big up respects for helps the new ppl out here