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    Less is More

    jackson was the bomb now we all be in shockwaves

    illiterate like this depression just demanded to stop thinking

    motherfuckers around me know my method is pure

    just for a second for a lesson for sure

    speak to the competition for a second just to think different

    im the bestest the rest is just defficate

    insulting sentences offending pedestrians

    mathmatic melodics inside a arabic arabesque

    desperate lessons demand simplification

    interesting anecdotes demand more attention

    binary demonic codes insinuating apocalypse

    intention destruction affirmative

    fight for survival is a must

    language losing itself inside of the alphabet

    destruction impending depending on circumstances

    desperate helplessness

    smoking a choke

    hey mister play a song for me

    cut up or shut up

    s p a c e

    time disassembling while im tripping on maybe

    selfless

    less is more.


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    Re: Less is More

    very interesting piece... i am not sure i even came close to understanding it but i did enjoy ur wordin and flow on this one...i dont rele know what ur concept was or why u titled it as u did...u definitely had some pretty deep thoughts n ideas throughout...anyway...good flow...idk tha concepts...good wordin n shyt...good metaphorz n a few punchez...i just like readin this...is was short n confusing but still a GOOD READ!!! KEEP ON WRITING HOMIE!!!

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