Quick Verse For The Haters

**Glory And Honor** · April 30th, 2009, 05:46 PM

Originally Posted by Rhymestein

Good look with that, faggot.

I know I look good, but no, I'm not a faggot. Sorry.

Fucking sheep.

**Obese_Jesus** · May 1st, 2009, 02:26 AM

Dude, honestly, you weren't even around this board when I battled.

There is a reason you can't just call out vets on a newbie-name and get them to battle you, it would be a waste of their time. What would I get out of trouncing every jumped-up cookie-cutter newbie that got mad when I won? A nice-looking battle record maybe. But certainly not respect from my peers.

What I'm trying to say in the simplest terms, is... I need an incentive to battle you.

How's about $50?

My Paypal is: obese_jesus@paypal.com

We can get the money mailed to a third party, they confirm it's been received, then we'll battle and the winner takes it all.

Sound good?

**Well Versed** · May 1st, 2009, 07:45 AM

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa stop tryin to take his life savingz OJ!!!

**Glory And Honor** · May 1st, 2009, 01:33 PM

You say "waste time" like text battling isn't wasting time to begin with. I fuck with this site at 2-3 am when I get in from chilling with people, and your rep on here means shit in the real world. Can't "waste" 10 minutes on 10 lines? Lol.

**Obese_Jesus** · May 2nd, 2009, 07:04 AM

Is that an "I'm too pussy." reply to the Paypal request?

**Woganeen** · May 2nd, 2009, 10:29 AM

i would think it is....

**Xclusive Verbalz** · May 2nd, 2009, 10:32 AM

Originally Posted by Obese_Jesus

Dude, honestly, you weren't even around this board when I battled.

There is a reason you can't just call out vets on a newbie-name and get them to battle you, it would be a waste of their time. What would I get out of trouncing every jumped-up cookie-cutter newbie that got mad when I won? A nice-looking battle record maybe. But certainly not respect from my peers.

What I'm trying to say in the simplest terms, is... I need an incentive to battle you.

How's about $50?

My Paypal is: obese_jesus@paypal.com

We can get the money mailed to a third party, they confirm it's been received, then we'll battle and the winner takes it all.

Sound good?

This Guy^^ Is A Vet???
Wow

**FRANCHIZZLE** · May 2nd, 2009, 10:55 AM

um.....that was a good first try....you had some good multi's in there,and it had a message but the wordplay wasnt on point.you could alway work on improving your rhymes,it was an ok drop alround the part that i think stood out the most was.

I'm too deep for these swimmers, chances are they would drown,
so they yell from the sidelines, having never been down.

**Obese_Jesus** · May 2nd, 2009, 02:12 PM

Originally Posted by Xclusive Verbalz

This Guy^^ Is A Vet???
Wow

This guy ^ is a faggot???

Not surprised.

**Glory And Honor** · May 3rd, 2009, 12:55 PM

Originally Posted by Obese_Jesus

Is that an "I'm too pussy." reply to the Paypal request?

Seriously though, are you and your followers all 12? You nuisance.

If you could both read and understand at the same time you would see what kind of a reply it was.

And why would I throw 50 bucks down on this BIASED ass site. You'd have all your little lunchtime sex buddies come on and vote against me. That's bullshit. This shit isn't real. It takes 10 minutes. YOU'RE the pussy for not wanting to battle. How do you not understand ANYTHING.

**christopher dre** · May 3rd, 2009, 03:46 PM

fuck all the bullshit in this thread...you had bout two bars in there that had potential. try making your shit sound not like a rant but a lyrical conversation. that's the easiest form of hip-hop songwritin in my opinion. after that, then start the wordplay, multis and punches. i still need to elevate myself but that's what i did to start getting better. keep writin and learn to forget about BLATANT HATE. there is a difference between feed you dont like and hate. once you learn that you'll be straight.

**Glory And Honor** · May 3rd, 2009, 03:52 PM

I write how I write.

And yeah, there's not a lot of constructive criticism happening here. Just shit.

**christopher dre** · May 3rd, 2009, 03:55 PM

can you feed my shit? its the "we like her verse"

**Cadaver.** · July 1st, 2009, 04:44 PM

lol @ "third party".

I would love to see this go on. This verse wasn't half as bad as everyone's saying.

You two should battle for $50, pick four judges that have no affiliation with either of you or each other, and spit a 16.

Then when one of you loses, they take it like a man and stay true to their word and send the $50. Or find a REAL third party. If I had PayPal, I would gladly, but yeah, I don't.