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Thread: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

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    Question lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    ayo gimmie the mic im bout to get buck wild
    and strangle emcees like mike tysons child
    serial lyricist most likely armed and in posession
    usin the mic to negotiate my terms of confession
    lets raise up the stakes lets go word for word
    or we can go stack to stack or we can go bird to bird
    any way you face it you goin 6 feet deep
    and i promise you son i aint losin no sleep
    check my fuckin record my flow is more like a rush
    thats gonna bust ya brain so i can skull fuck the mush
    when everythings done and the end is in sight
    realize son im why your daughters looks white
    puffin away calm as i read in the paper
    witnesse say they could smell the vapor
    of the fire i unleashed on the mic that night
    when an unknow suspect ended the fight
    he dropped lyrics so raw he blew the challengers head off
    now im held up in the crib in a hostile stand off
    3 hostages dead im almost out of choices
    no options left but to listen to the voices
    strap c4 to my back load up the strap
    put on a hooded sweat shirt glasses and a baseball cap
    open the front door hands in the air
    little do they know i aint goin no where
    as swat rushes in i hit the ignition
    and blow us all up beyond recognition
    screaming and crying weve all been dismemembered
    3 hostages and 6 swat dead thats how ill be remembered
    you might think im sick and though know one will miss me
    next to john wayne gacy ive made my name part of history

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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    Dammmmmmn man. I like it. You got style.

    Love this line:
    ayo gimmie the mic im bout to get buck wild
    and strangle emcees like mike tysons child

    7/10. But then again I'm easily impressed.

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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    thanks man im workin on some new stuff that was just a quick one i wrote lol they get way sicker ill have some new stuff up tomorrow

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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    Start text battling my man. You could cause some serious damage .

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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    go read our om....Warning to Kenny...


    then i'll give ya feedback
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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    im new here i have no idea wht any of that means

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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    go give us feedback on this

    link

    because they will close your thread if u havent given 2 feedbacks in this section real talk bro


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    Re: lol i dunno just some sick shit i wrote

    good looking out i saw that in the rules but didnt quite get what it meant thanks

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