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Thread: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

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    Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    Im gonna blast you here till you come out of your hole motherfucker....

    OK, so the administrators are obviously here to save you...
    but even wit ten lines, I still managed to slay you...
    Im tellin you old man, Imma crush yo ass...
    worse than Barcotic...
    cause everyone knows he bussed yo ass...
    To me, its confusin how elusive this dude is....
    the diss was ruthless...
    this faggot prolly went and told....
    Ooooo, look what dude did....
    Are you kidding me nigga, I know you read it...
    either you or your crew....
    aight fuck it forget it...
    I got enough lines to give you and ya crew some trouble...
    have you fucks scratchin ya heads like sudoku puzzles...
    If you goin ban me nigga ban me, but you'd be a hoe for that...
    otherwise this aint hide and seek, your literally too old for that...


    Steeeeephen...................

    Imma mash you up every chance I get motherfucker.
    ....a period of serious, for you idiot lyricist...... you might have PENMANSHIP, but im a LYRIC CALYGRAPHIST.....

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    ....a period of serious, for you idiot lyricist...... you might have PENMANSHIP, but im a LYRIC CALYGRAPHIST.....

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    You talk a good enough game, but your verse has a lot of hesitation cuts rather than effective punches. Also, your antics don't match your signature. With that and your current piece in mind, I believe you're doing yourself a disservice with the boisterous intros and/or outros to your written work. Do the damage in your verse(s).

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    I have been pretty much boo'd out of Open Mic...but i want to know what pplz think bout my writing abilities...PLEASE HELP ME OUT!!!

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    appreciate the feedback, but there is a method to my madness......
    ....a period of serious, for you idiot lyricist...... you might have PENMANSHIP, but im a LYRIC CALYGRAPHIST.....

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    he should ban you, for deliberate wackness
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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    yo drama jones, your flow isnt visible like obama homes, You got that aweful flow, its not even a flow, its a frozen river, I hope thats not all the ammo you came wit, cuz if it is you wont even ignight a flame twit, you lame kid!!!!

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    .......aaaannnd roger. Your next buddy. Im so garbage, I'll battle you and your butt buddy when Im done wit Stephen.
    ....a period of serious, for you idiot lyricist...... you might have PENMANSHIP, but im a LYRIC CALYGRAPHIST.....

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    The flow was off, the rhymes were weak, the topic lacked imagination. Be more clever.

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    Quote Originally Posted by DramaJones View Post
    .......aaaannnd roger. Your next buddy. Im so garbage, I'll battle you and your butt buddy when Im done wit Stephen.
    who you callin a butt buddy??
    drop a link to da battle or stfu

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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    lmaoaoaoa

    Drama jones sonning this guy into bolivian like he mike tyson or some shit


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    Re: Stephen... COM out COM out where ever you are.

    Quote Originally Posted by Camarac View Post
    lmaoaoaoa

    Drama jones sonning this guy into bolivian like he mike tyson or some shit


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    rofl

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