dope man... nice job.... love your imagery and flow... and multies and inners.... and creative topic....... anyways, you had alots of great lines which in term put great imagery...

"The mountain of fire leaks lava as magma spits
an the blazing rivers drip down past where the dragon sits
as it's majestic fangs split it's tongue - it seems to anger it
n' those who arrive to vanquish it, already know they can't hang with it
its insane, an gets tempermental when its introduced to anguish's kiss
he roars an the cave rings as the monsters language is hissed.."

love these 6 lines... great multies and flow... vocab was on point.... and imary great... anyways, great job