put down the white flag

[Senses Fail]

egotism-crime
corruption-expectations
and monuments to greed.
the assumption that
implicit consideration
is due.
Why? fuck that..
cyber world
that, we the youth
have inherited is not respectable.
hypocrisy-arrogance
of those
in charge
of the status quo, have destroyed it.
greed-arrogance-LEGACY.
yet, the term
"respectyourelders" should be respected.
respect is earned. not given.
fucking sell-outs.
crime-
society provokes it
goverment-politics-primitive egotism
of primitive humanity.
youth is not at fault
nor minorities.
violence.
a symptom of
the disease of decadent
materialism.
we're terminally infected.
decay of society, inner-outer
destruction.
corruption-
political or social reform?
I highly doubt this.
insance public
generates an insane
governing body.
inner strife,
unnaturalness and division
reflected by the outer world.
only the face changes,
not its essential intention.
hypocrisy is rampant in the
modern world,
because the values of society are either lies
or based on lies.
WORSHIP-WORSHIP the whore ship
of the egotistical dollar, and the facades it buys!
expectations-
miserable by nature.
"you cant change the world overnight"
pshh..
we/you better figure it out.
realism-
it's a very low mark
efforts of global reform
reflect nothing but pessimism
contained within placating
political speeches.
greed-
lavish,
physically unnecessary.
monuments of greed.
"protecting our interests"
Don't say FUCK THE WORLD.
say FUCK THE PEOPLE!

[Senses Fail]

A political, cliche rant about the downfall of society.

[Jon Dagel]

Good shit man, cliche and played out. People do it all the time, but still a nice read. You stoke me happy with your imagery and wordplay. It was very masterful in the poetic sense. The emotion was only decent, but still some what enjoyable. It was original in the sense that it was played. But that there means it was still original. Flow was poetic. Fluent. Flipped off the tongue easy. In the end, nice read. Keep writing.