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    Re: Shattered Hero

    heh, nah i'm just doin OM's for now cuz my comp broke n i can't record lol

    hittin up links now btw
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    yea, good read... wording was nice... couldnt put it better myself, your flow was pretty good this overall was a good piece... sorry for such short feed.
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-343762.html

    if u'd hit that up plz.. you in a crew?
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    thanks for the feed and thanks for the offer but i'm in TNL

    bump
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    very nice piece....like alot of the people said this piece had really good imagery and had some nice rhyming vocabulary.
    it held its efffect pretty much through the whole thing but it also couldve been stronger at certian pieces of it also.
    not much more i can say that ahsnt been said.

    plz give some feed on the link below......

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...le-343840.html

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    Re: Shattered Hero

    bump.
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    yuuuup
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    Dope piece, not really anything to work on except next time i would choose a topic that is rarely used, this topic is used in about every topical battle

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    Re: Shattered Hero

    true...bump
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    Re: Shattered Hero

    bump...was lookin for some more feed on this piece, i liked this one
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