Quick keystyle

[10fingaz]

aint really mess with the rap thing, more of a beatmaker but, quick shit,

It's a new dawn....wake up and move on//
I got, green to make like a rake on a new lawn//
My dukes on...so who want to duke huh?//
Bring yours troops dun...I'm unseen like blue corn// (what?)
Fresh like a new born...flex wit da shoes on~//
~my feet...Ya kinda like Ali in his true form//
Too strong, stay on point...like a bull horn//
I'm full on...Blue Drinks and green smokes//
My nigga I'm too dope...I keep my green up//
In the VIP pimp, "I'm in" like "deep throats"//
You think I give up? Nah Nah, go read up//
I'm a boss man daddy my team will go nuts//
My goons they will touch and leave you fucked up//
Like droppin the soap, you lean you fucked up//
What's up...you know I'm a floss//
Stunt hard on a nigga, got money in the bank cuz you kno
I'm a boss..

My feedback
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...am-343320.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-343924.html

[WillKill4Money]

i thought the flow and rhythm was sick..the lyrics was aight but seemed more like it would be a verse in some club banger...some real mainstream type shit...you wasnt bad for jus keyin up some thin' right quik and for bein more of a producer... keep at it...drop a few more and start droppin audios on your beats.........

plz check out my open mic
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...am-343320.html
leave some honest feedback thnx

[10fingaz]

thx. appreciate the feedback

[Messiah Kaeto]

Agreed, the flow was fuckin heavy on this, .. The lyrics didnt really have a message, but to be honest, it was a key, it ain't gonna have a 'point'.

Overall though, that flow is quality.

Keep it comin, maybe even dro something youve spent more time on next?

Return the favour

Peace & God Bless

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