Enmity. Vs. lil rell

[Tragedian.]

A hobo who sleeps good he just rhymes rough, now let have it
The only girls he 'picks-up' are from fat beauty pagents
Alright^

vs

Nothing.

This battle was pretty weak..lil rell you're getting there and you're taking the tips on how to get better but you're punches are just to weak and simple you gotta make them fresh and actually hit and take out the " " shit looks wack...enm you came decent had some alright lines but wtf @ the closer with the // don't do that shit but none less...v/enm...hit the sig.

[commentary]

I beleive that Enmity had 1 good punch
Inspired by mainstream quick ta Jack-off ta gay teen
I could murk you with my mind dead in the middle of a daydream

V.
Enmity became an enemy he more like target practice
More homosexual activity go on in his mouth than Rupauls Mattress


Both had good punches but those punches are good examples to me
of who came the hardest and whose punches were the strongest




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RickTick v. Commentary

[Enmity.]

uppin...
Rise...need Votes

[Tae]

i liked rell's opener but thas about it..out of both verses. so v/rell.

[Don Q]

lil rell funny as shit. my vote foes to him.

this guy wants to take a long nap in my lyrical graveyard
thinks hes a thug..but "leaving with a boner" is the only time he "goes hard"
how about for holloween i turn this herb into the "headless horsemen"
i hope "rapping" aint ur "plan A" cuz if it is then u "failed" at life
call me lil rell aka "hammer" the way i "nailed" his wife
enmity....do u really think ur good? never mind....he tell his self lies
rappin aint ur thing....find another occupation...sell burgers and fries
u call urself "enmity"....wow how creativly corny
i was gonna say a line about hitin him with the butt of my gun...
but knowin this fag he might get "horny"

vs

You seem keen, you should of paid me to 'lay low'/
I use no multies, but this keyed verse still gives you a great 'K.O.'/

[Enmity.]

uppin....

[':Tyrant:']

Emmity..punches great.....real nice...

V/Emmity..

[RickTick]

enmity won it for sure the day dream got the win

but lil rell i was feeling that only time you go hard junk it was fire

but lil rell your flow was sorta off you just need to make the flow come togehter more jsut a little sloppy

other then that you could have had it

so i giving this one to enimty

[lil rell]

ok uppin 1 more vote lets get this off the board

[lil rell]

4-2 still uppin

[Wyte..]

Both had wack verses. This was just an overall wack battle.
Lil Rell wins though. He had better attempts at punchlines and
persons. Both work ok punches, personals, wordplay. Also both
try coming with more consistancy, creativity, and witty punches.
So both need a lot of elevation, read LLL battles, or any good
battles you can find, and work in the cypher to get better.

Vote - Lil Rell