ssj champ.... is rusty :sad:
anyways, the flow was pretty cool, although the transitions from rhyme to rhyme were put on a little sloppily, gotta work on that, vocab could use some work, although not neccessarry.... ok piece, get unrusty man!
hit up "Technicolor Angel"
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its been a while....thanks though...up.
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Sweet drop man. Shame it want longer but feelin the flow
up........
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well done.
topic was interesting and i'm looking forward to part 2
The rhymes were good overall but this was kinda too short
but still pretty tight...flow was nice continuesly throughout...
vocab and complexity, imagery, creativity was nice as well...
Overall this was a good peice and i'd like to see part 2...
peace~
word...pt.2 comin soon........up..
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