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u drop first
due 20 min after check.
eclipz
Enthrawl.
10 lines
house rules
u drop first
due 20 min after check.
check
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Yo Eclipz brings the rhymes to the light like the chosen one
And I bring heat to the fires of the frozen sun
Ya best defense is to start doin bombing runs
Cause suicide is what u chose, when u first begun
Enthrawl nigga please jus gimmie a break
ya rhymes is fake ur lifes at stake just except ya fate
U gotta stop stockin me fag why cant u get away
hope uv enjoyed ur 15 years on the planet cause its endin today
eclipz is ready to battle to any nigga who stepping
cause I overshadow my enemies with ma lyrical weapon
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ch-check...
lol you speak so terrible so i need to wash yo mouth with soap
cuz yeah yo name is eclipz............................................ .
but thats like 4 times a year......the amount of times you come dope
thought you could download yo verse through yo usb port
got halfway through yo comp....den eventually fell short
your wack just leave rb infact lemme open up the internet door
thought i'd drop you to a lower level...................................
then i took a second to realize that only hell is beneath the floor
your fuckin wack...yo wholle careers gonna fold
cuz your just an ass.................................
and you mouth spittin out shit cuz its da asshole
there i sonned you, and kid, you just made this to easy, hoe
cuz the biggest thing in this battle, was me, 'n ya shitty ego
your fuckin wack...yo wholle careers gonna fold
cuz your just an ass.................................
and you mouth spittin out shit cuz its da asshole
lol you speak so terrible so i need to wash yo mouth with soap
cuz yeah yo name is eclipz............................................ .
but thats like 4 times a year......the amount of times you come dope
thought you could download yo verse through yo usb port
got halfway through yo comp....den eventually fell short
your wack just leave rb infact lemme open up the internet door
thought i'd drop you to a lower level...................................
then i took a second to realize that only hell is beneath the floor
your fuckin wack...yo wholle careers gonna fold
cuz your just an ass.................................
and you mouth spittin out shit cuz its da asshole
there i sonned you, and kid, you just made this to easy, hoe
cuz the biggest thing in this battle, was me, 'n ya shitty ego
oops here it is...
blah, eclipse or w/e not feeling ya verse holmez... opening bars is self-glory, didnt see much hard hittn punchlines in ya verse towards your opponenet. Work on being more witty w/ wordplay, be more personal, come more consistent. Saw quite a bit of filler, nothing was hard hittin, tried personals but it didnt seem to work, work on direction in your battles, enthrawl, ya get my vote because you had the better verse overall, decent structure, and consistency was coo. had some punches in ya verse was decent, dropped better than your opopnent, pz...
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uppin...
Enthrawl
Better Flow Wordplay And Structure
V//Enthrawl
really one sided battle..enthrawl killed it with his punches, and other dude didnt really have anything..
~no hate~
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give dat 2 e e had an overall betta verse
v//eth
vte enthrawl better flow
eth got this easly other dude didnt punched him once...plus eth good some funny parts n good flow
V//eth
Eth got the overall.........
..........clipse need to work on the structure and harder punches fams....
v/eth
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