good piece. as people have said its a pretty common topic. but i liked it anyways. good flow structure was alright. more betetr vocabulary would have made this piece stand out from the others, but anyways. good job.
good piece. as people have said its a pretty common topic. but i liked it anyways. good flow structure was alright. more betetr vocabulary would have made this piece stand out from the others, but anyways. good job.