u need to shut the fuck up he wants HONEST FEED not no dick rider like your faggot ass
u need to shut the fuck up he wants HONEST FEED not no dick rider like your faggot ass
Ur the fucking biter....i'll get link now....ima report in in IR
Lol im in this peice dipshit.....and yes i want honest feed.....but u obviossly didnt read it
HerbOriginally Posted by DevilOG
lol that was 1 punch u bitch lol u a fucker check it its over me and b_reez settled out difrences lol dumbass its one punch its not the hole fucking verse
DAM!!!!!!!!!!get a life
i care y.....THE FUCK UP
..............Oh No
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Wat?
Chill people, dont clog threads up with this shit, neway.........
This was an ok piece, i say ok because i felt the "story" between god and satan could of been portrayed better, it also kind of dragged on a bit, also rhyme scheme was a bit sketchy, try not to swear so much aswell, it doesnt always put out the right emotion. Your vocabulary was decent though but the piece was kinda funny at times, which isnt always a bad thing as it brings a lighter note to the piece. But on the whole i definatly thought this could of been better but it wasnt a bad piece, keep elevating and bring more imagery to your work.
Keep writing.
Finally good feed.....thank u
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Hmm.. Nice Shit.. I've Done Something Like This Before As Well.. Jesus Vs. Satan.
alrite drop
flowd a bit
rhymin ws alrite
structure ws alrite
elevate
keep tryin
tht aint feedback
atleast comment on qualities it has - stupid ass fathafucka
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gd drop
flowd was there
rhymin was alrite
elevate
keep @it
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