jus a lil sum sum.....a small poem.....i was felt this shit had to be said

[Emcee Juggernaut]

The burden of life..
It's so heavy we can't carry it,
Fly off to heaven in my chariot, Poet Laureate,
Travel the underground railroads like Ms. Harriet,
-Tubman, no frontin,
Many nights awaken in a cold sweat,
Visions of hatred, murders, and burnt crosses,
So many victories and gains, but some many losses,
Journey to mansions in the hamptons on white horses,
Imagine that, a place with no conflict and no hurt,
But for now, let's work, towards heaven on Earth,
Give up on the one problem that makes this living hell,
The things we do everyday to destroy ourselves,
And man I know these ideas sound crazy,
But ay, I'm here to save the babies,
A change gon' come, trust, I'm livin proof,
Social, Spiritual, Personal, Love,
The meaning of life which comes from up above
Grasp the meanings and translate it to rhymes,
That's the real truth, and I'm only speakin my mind,
See my only dream is for my people to be free,
Reach that place, the pain all cease,
No more shootouts, heists gettin loot out,

[Emcee Juggernaut]

i was feelin this shit hard......it was deep for me........hope u enjoi!

hit me up if its worthy....peace out
the jugga

[Content]

this was alright..m akes me think of that fuccin one mic video miked with that thugz mansion video/song

i fealt it though and it was worth readin homie..peace

~Content~

[Calisto]

I thought of Thug Mansion too when I read it but I really liked the first few lines, to me that's what really "packed the punch". I felt like this wasn't finished, maybe it was that comma and no rhyme with it but I felt like I wasn't reading all of your thoughts, is there more? Over all this was a good peice, I wish I could write passionatly about world problems... I'm glad some one can

[Emcee Juggernaut]

dont worry....i'll be back....

[Varentao]

Yeah this was a real raw piece...

....had that gritty and full on emotion to it....which brought it alive in many sense...

..i didn't get this part

Imagine that, a place with no conflict and no hurt,
But for now, let's work, towards heaven on Earth,

I mean surely heaven on earth would be a place with no conflict and no hurt, and then some...but then it seems to indicate working towards it...which makes some sense...but it just doesn't seem to fit as well as i think it could....i mean i get the heaven on earth part for sure, but it seems too giant a leap...

but still, it didn't disrupt the piece for me, would just like to clarify what you meant exactly by that...

...very nice piece...respect...

[Emcee Juggernaut]

....continued.....war in the street,
Most high give me strength when I'm feelin weak,
See, I tasted heaven when I met my lady, she so sweet,
I gotta live for her if for nothin,
All my homies, parolies, brothas, and young'ns,
Lemme school you to some game, no frontin,
Sit back and study the scripture,
Yo it's not enough willing to view life's picture,
That's worth 1,000 words, formulate a verse,
With the love of a mother, but the hatred of a curse,
Feel me, It's 2 sides to everything...
Love and Hate, Peace and War, Rich and Poor,
Opposites we encounter each and everyday,
Isn't it such a beautiful thing?
The balance of life, the Yin and the Yang,
Bitter and Sweet tastes poured from the same cup,
Pure; as the mind of an innocent child,
Foul; as the life that drove men to be wild,
A marriage to knowledge, the only true code of the streets,
My people handle ya business,
But hold your existance as sacred as crucifixes,
Love family and love no riches, or be slaves
Slaves to money, debt, and slaves to the system,
So many died in the struggle and God I miss'em...