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    Love Lost

    gun to his temple...
    he sat back pondering like the brain her ring on his pinky
    cept he wasnt tryin to take over the world just get dirty enough to be filthy
    he thought money would keep a woman around
    searchin for away to keep her down
    he saw material things n shiny blings dont keep them all interested
    thats all he found
    he wasnt love struck but time had him love stuck
    he had that one in a million, all she needed was his sweet n love
    all she wanted was his comfort wasnt really bout the receipts n bucks
    she was lookin for the RESPECT aretha asked
    but she was lookin for love in the wrong hood n only found cats that would beat her ass
    he wanted a down ass bitch n she wanted a gangster n a gentleman
    he found a smart shorty with that bomb shit she got a gangster and a fellon-man
    she kept him satisfied and he kept her lookin right
    she got lonely but it wasnt in his sight
    he spent most of his days sleepin sellin drugs most nights
    she kept the crib clean ate alone often then she started to lose life
    once upon a time her eyes lit up when she was addressed
    now honey had the blank stare of a fein you could tell she was depressed
    she tried to leave him once she couldnt be alone in a relationship
    he came home the night she packed her bags n threatened to break her shit
    grabbed her by the throat n told her they could make it work
    she had cried many times but the tears he saw rain from her that night were the first
    it didnt seem to make him feel bad or remorseful
    he let his hand go from her throat then the one from her torso
    told her not to wait up said he'd be back in the morning and slammed the door shut
    she cried the rest of the night
    she would of left but he would of found her n she was right
    her brilliant mind was now a thing to be dismissed
    and her vibrant voice was soft as a mothers kiss
    bout 4 o'lock that morning she granted her final wish
    kissed the golden cross around her neck n slit both of her wrists
    she purposely left the door open like she never did
    bout 9 that mornin he walked up to the door and saw somethin was wrong
    touch the door knob n pushed it in
    his eyes widened when he saw her sittin in her own blood
    not knowin what to think he dropped to his knees and started to pray
    this was prolly the first time he could feel her pain
    but it was to late
    he kissed her on the tip of her nose then took a golden band off her ring finger that slid with her blood
    then took a hollowtip he kept in his sock put it in the clip slid it in his piece and cocked.....
    Last edited by stack money; October 27th, 2005 at 12:58 AM Reason: add one word
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    iiight shyts hott

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