A Voiceless Matter.

[Nique.]

thanks

[~.A.R.~]

A glimpse of my fame comes from being sick and deranged
Wishing they tamed my vision to slain...depicted my game
Attempting to save my victims while I was inflicting the pain
Exhibited my system of rage as a convict in its reign
Couldn't pivot or change. . . listened to the skits in my brain
Twitching as the skits turn to scripts and the scripts to a page
A page turned to a way. . . a way for me to remain enslaved
Chained and engraved as I lash out in disdain till this day. .
Tarnished any insignificant thing that restricted my pace
My intention to hate became existent through haste

that was iLL as fuck

[Nique.]

yea..i'm tired

[B.I.Detained.]

Nique this was a quality read. I can't say I've gone through it proper yet
but from the skim read I was really impressed. Been a long while since
I seen a Topical from you so props. I'm off to get pissed soon so when I have
time, i.e, maybe tomorrow, I'll def leave some worthy feedback. Plus I'll 'up' it with another post I do it'll up the thread, hence you not having to do it :-)

Spk soon

[Nique.]

mmhm

[mcl]

great absolutely great the lenght wasd great the rhymes were great all of it was great

[mcl]

one more thing the structure used in this piece