~~~temper Tantrums~~~~

[woozy]

im havin constant temper -tantrums
yeah they not gon tempt or- ban us
they start beefs,take out me,no way
cant top me,str8 out streets,okay?
puff puff pass yo,im bettin my chronic
that ya muhfuckin threat is my promis
weed stacked,dont relax,homey blast
we last,wont we pass , no feed back
10clips came,wen it rains,dogs n cats
end wit pain,then its aimed,off it caps
structure is strong, but wut can i say
stuffin tha bong,they cummin my way
ready fa action,evry one rappin illa
evry one askin. any one thats a killa
vocabulary so so,but oh fuckin well
askin me bout it,go tha fuck ta hell

[Daemon]

=\ Hope you aren't serious, man. This was your basic fucking stupid flex with no real originality. Your structure only looked decent because you kept trimming off letters from your words. You flipped cats and dogs to dogs and cats so it rhymed. No originality or anything, man. Really, elevate some.

And honestly RTF on 'Kamikaze Vendetta', no hate.

[Kr4CK3D C3LLZ]

i dont mean ta drag kidd' but your flow was shit. didnt feel ya style or ya mood. kill it .

[Aquiles]

yea i agree your flow wasn't good...structure was the only ok thing, rhymes were abc'ish......you need to elevate man......

[sILLable]

Elevate....try Again!

[Tha Reason]

it was good i like the scheme and stlye

[:.Apollo.:]

it was descent... just need to elevate... alot... like a shit load... like i dont think u can elevate as much as you need to... but um you may...
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[:InSaNe:]

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