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    shooting and killing dont make a g// a real g got money// thats why im trying to cop the benz toppless//drop it and paint it something like honey//my flow something like money in the bank you can count on it// you can build a house and put a fountian on it // you can invest in it// and in 2 months you can cash out and retire with it//but when the flow come back its like mutual funds by the stacks// or 8 balls in the quanities of 50 packs// the clips hold 16//the tahoe sit on 23s// during the drought i might dig up 7500 keys// and put my sid e of the state on there feet// yall niggaz cant race wit me// ill give you a week long head start// or we can race to april and you can start in march// my flow flawless and always on point
    HITMAN a.k.a. ASSASIN

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    HITMAN a.k.a. ASSASIN

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    Your structure was bad man...try to fix it up a little lik not in a paragraph form...it was kinda hard to understand this though but ur wordplay was ok nd it kinda looked lik u didnt really spend sum time wit this.Just keep on tryin though.

    peace.

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    dawg i'ma be real wit ya.....this is garbage, typical bullshit rap. u sound like a fake ass cash money records.....whats next u gonna make'em say uhhhhh....like master p

    if i was u i would delete.....find a real verse, copy, paste, and then claim it to be urs

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    Needs a proper title.

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