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    A Lovers Sensation

    A Lovers Sensation......

    I Rise,

    Body soft and anxious, ambitious for those lips to bring me sweet, gentle kisses. Touch like no other. Face-to Face body is achen and amazingly craving my lovers sensation....

    As The Temperature Rise,

    I feel you deep inside of me, no boundaries. Every time you penetrate I fall in love again and again, don't want it to end. Hear me, fear me, and feel my growing impatience. Lightly licking me low to greater elations.........a lovers sensation....

    Lovers Rise,

    Lay me down, part my legs like moses did the red sea. Leaning forth, he's pushing deeper, pumping in circular motions. Grip your body to pull you closer. Moan for him, scream for him, cum for him. Let him taste this chocolate goodness, that sweet stuff. Bringing great temptations......this is A Lovers Sensation....

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    is this poetry section r not?? :|

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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    yea it is.

    To me, this poem isnt what im feeling, it was good, but it felt more like a porno script written on def poetry. It was nice but probably would've been better spoken word and not on paper. Hearing it would've helped give the poem more life.
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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