..Thanks For Feed..
..Thanks For Feed..
yo that was dope total illness... i sed once to my religion teacher i was goin to write the Bible II lol but ur veriosn was hott tooo niiice drop man
This was a pretty decent drop to read at 5am, kept me going. Not too inspirational though, but still good. Everything could've been touched up a bit in this piece. The theme was good, seems you thought it all out pretty good before you wrote it, had a pretty good idea of what was going on. The flow was sketchy, seems the only times you would rhyme were at the ends of line, but oh well, if that's your style, and it flows, keep it. The wordplay and vocab was pretty good, nothing spectacular, but it works, keep droppin man.
..Ty For The Feed..
nice drop..I like
Wow Thats The Worst Feed Ever..
hey....dont eat it then I dont have enough food what is this? feed the emcees?
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