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Thread: ~~~sTr8-PUNCH"Z~~~ f/b plz...

  1. March 9th, 2005, 08:25 PM #1
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    Thumbs up ~~~sTr8-PUNCH"Z~~~ f/b plz...

    Best to 'wait on pain', I use spells to sicken...
    my foes *reside in the south*, I bring 'HELL' to victims...
    don't 'play no games', you'll be compelled to witness...
    I'll put ya *eyes in ya mouth* & make you 'TELL' a 'VISION'...

    Ya teams pussy when I bring the Hollows & things...
    I'll blow ya brains out the back so you can follow ya dreams...
    when I'm done, you wont even know what Oxygen means...
    I'll buss my gun, pick you up and make yo swallow the steam...

    Aint NO way that you last'N wit me...
    this dude has to be weak, I'm clapp'N the heat~
    for GLANC'N @ me...
    Aint no wau you liv'n or breath'n after I speak...
    I'll put ya thoughts N the ground so imagine the STREET...

    depictions are graphic, I can picture the hatchets...
    flames encoded in scrolls & my scriptures R magic~
    ripp'N it savage, wit cllips N yo' cabbage,
    cant vent from a CASKET thats why I'm spitt'N this passage    ...

    I'm sinister N savage, havoc wit benevolent rages...
    Oxymorons rollin off my tongue from irrellevant pages...
    No direction, no meaning, no intelligent sages...
    just relieving stress, believe these TEXT or inheret the raz'R'Z...

    My melon amazes even the likes of me, cuz my life is street...
    my verbals make my MIC complete, I'll put the night to sleep~
    as I fight the thieves,~ who surround look up 2 me, so I guess my heights
    increased    ...

    ayo feedback plz:

    my 2ew linx...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175595
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174890

    GEDD@me....

    UPP'n.....................
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  2. March 9th, 2005, 08:29 PM #2
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    eyyo, shit was tight homie... i aint lei khow u formatetd it tho hard to read

    when I'm done, you wont even know what Oxygen means...
    I'll buss my gun, pick you up and make yo swallow the steam...

    im feelin that im dfeeli nthis peice
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  3. March 9th, 2005, 08:31 PM #3
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    Hahaha, that shit was fire man. I love the "Tell A Vision" and the "Follow ya dreams" punches. You crazy as hell, lol. Flow and structure was good as well as vocab. I gotta see more shit like this from you fam.

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  4. March 9th, 2005, 09:05 PM #4
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    Da Crakk DOn : ayo good look'n on the feed back, appreciate it, homiE....
    Check in 2morrow on anoth'R open Mic I'ma drop, same style
    punches, give a holla, & I'll RETURN THE FAV:..................
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    feedback, keep droppn.....I'll rtrn the fav:.........holla

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  5. March 11th, 2005, 12:30 PM #5
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    Thumbs up

    Uppn.................


    Can I Get Some More Feedback Plz.......................................

    Vote On My Most Recent Battlez Plz, F/b Also, Will Return Th Favor

    BATTLES:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852

    HOTT!!
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  6. March 11th, 2005, 12:46 PM #6
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    it was decent as a beef/battle drop but not much as a solid open mic...

    good wordplay, meta's etc...

    flow was simple/basic though...

    5/10

    mines:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176869
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176604

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  7. March 11th, 2005, 02:14 PM #7
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    it was iight, dont like the colorin shit too much tho, real nice flow
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  8. March 11th, 2005, 02:28 PM #8
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    GOOD LOOKN PPL......................DROP LINX ILL RETURN THE FAV................

    Best to 'wait on pain', I use spells to sicken...
    my foes *reside in the south*, I bring 'HELL' to victims...
    don't 'play no games', you'll be compelled to witness...
    I'll put ya *eyes in ya mouth* & make you 'TELL' a 'VISION'...

    Ya teams pussy when I bring the Hollows & things...
    I'll blow ya brains out the back so you can follow ya dreams...
    when I'm done, you wont even know what Oxygen means...
    I'll buss my gun, pick you up and make yo swallow the steam...

    Aint NO way that you last'N wit me...
    this dude has to be weak, I'm clapp'N the heat~
    for GLANC'N @ me...
    Aint no wau you liv'n or breath'n after I speak...
    I'll put ya thoughts N the ground so imagine the STREET...

    depictions are graphic, I can picture the hatchets...
    flames encoded in scrolls & my scriptures R magic~
    ripp'N it savage, wit cllips N yo' cabbage,
    cant vent from a CASKET thats why I'm spitt'N this passage...

    I'm sinister N savage, havoc wit benevolent rages...
    Oxymorons rollin off my tongue from irrellevant pages...
    No direction, no meaning, no intelligent sages...
    just relieving stress, believe these TEXT or inheret the raz'R'Z...

    My melon amazes even the likes of me, cuz my life is street...
    my verbals make my MIC complete, I'll put the night to sleep~
    as I fight the thieves,~ who surround look up 2 me, so I guess my heights
    increased...

    ayo feedback plz:

    my 2ew linx...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175595
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174890

    GEDD@me....

    UPP'n.....................

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