that was emotional
it was put together pretty good
you need to work on the flow
but it was the typical black boy shit.....lol..just playin i had to get you back for the white boy thing but keep doin ya thing pimp peace out
that was emotional
it was put together pretty good
you need to work on the flow
but it was the typical black boy shit.....lol..just playin i had to get you back for the white boy thing but keep doin ya thing pimp peace out
Nice piece man... Good vocab... Great imagery and emotion... You wrote confidently with your vocab and I was really feeling this. Could've been a little longer I suppose but that's no big factor... Quality not quantity eh? This was definately quality. I enjoyed this.
Keep it up man... If you could check out "Blind to Reality?" in my sig I'd appreciate it...
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