My mind lays vacant, stirred in the ebb of Jane’s Addiction
I search to change…... but her pain remains my jurisdiction
good opener
really liked dis piece....feelin it....keep em comin fam
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My mind lays vacant, stirred in the ebb of Jane’s Addiction
I search to change…... but her pain remains my jurisdiction
good opener
really liked dis piece....feelin it....keep em comin fam
~1~
step to dis n get shanked up
ive knocked out so many teeth the toothfairy went bankrupt
-Big L
this was deep i liked this alot you changed the rap battle game holla back..check out my mind traveling piece reply back
This means what?Originally Posted by sick thoughtz
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up.
and again.
Oooo very nice. The vocab was very nice, your flow was pretty consistant and your topic was nice, the only down part was some of your imagery was so quite well devoloped as it could have been.
My, my you displayed some definately dudeish qualities. You will be a dude one day, grasshopper, til then keep dropping and make The Next Level proud
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nice i enjoyed readin this verse i thought u started strong and ended strong keep spittin
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