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  1. #16
    My mind lays vacant, stirred in the ebb of Jane’s Addiction
    I search to change…... but her pain remains my jurisdiction

    good opener

    really liked dis piece....feelin it....keep em comin fam

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    step to dis n get shanked up
    ive knocked out so many teeth the toothfairy went bankrupt
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  2. #17
    sick thoughtz
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    this was deep i liked this alot you changed the rap battle game holla back..check out my mind traveling piece reply back

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    Quote Originally Posted by sick thoughtz
    this was deep i liked this alot you changed the rap battle game holla back..check out my mind traveling piece reply back
    This means what?


    Thanks for the + comments? Anymore?

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    up.

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    and again.

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    Oooo very nice. The vocab was very nice, your flow was pretty consistant and your topic was nice, the only down part was some of your imagery was so quite well devoloped as it could have been.

    My, my you displayed some definately dudeish qualities. You will be a dude one day, grasshopper, til then keep dropping and make The Next Level proud



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    nice i enjoyed readin this verse i thought u started strong and ended strong keep spittin

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