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Thread: you cannot understand me... *wink*

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    you cannot understand me... *wink*

    magna opulence divided by the future populace
    leaves little coppers left for kids who aren't as popular
    it's third eye ocular we need corrective lenses
    yet perspective lends itself more to corrective fences
    sniping from elected trenches i dessiminate
    lock, loaded red dot lasered to inseminate
    the masses with classes on inflection of emphasis
    or what passes as tragic impasses; so placid
    like the lake or your flacid verses sorry situation
    I keep at bay shit that makes me wanna blaze one
    cutting crazed ones smoking vapour off the blade of knife
    as a hiphop sacrament i take it in like the body of christ
    broader expanse that wrecks plans and checks hands
    checks feet and checks eyes for the lies with demands
    none understands, that in fact i'm a thief beyond belief
    is it fact or fiction? or really that I don't sleep, don't eat,
    don't live, don't breath atleast not without a backdrop beat
    to bring the crowd to their knees and oh c'mon please...
    isn't it funny bitch? M-C are just two out of twenty six
    letters in the alphabet that gives the crowd such a funny fix
    gimme my money bitch i've had enough of waiting
    curtain call is coming and I'm sewn into the drapings
    as I flow into this raping, metalyrically speaking
    grabbing my hash pipe i see that it is leaking
    cupping the fluids chronic druids are the plumbers
    drink in this holy water and watch us get dumber
    Hence Forward

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    very nice mag....nice metaphors...nice commentary on modern society and on the life of an mc...
    Bittersweet

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    yea... i'm hating that last line though today
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    heh....dont sweat it man, nice piece, I liked the insight and vocab in this one, it all seemed to connect and flow well and made for a good read....havent seen you around in awhile....whats goin on??

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    This was sick. Metaphors, wordplay, 'flow'. Would you let me nominate this bitch? Or would that defy your morale?
    can I kick it?

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    *tells you not to nominate him for anything*
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    We should crew up, a tagteam...We spit the same things but with different approach...I DO understand it...Some of your diction IS OFF. A trech may NOt be elected....But nice nonetheless...keep typing. 8/10

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    I’d explain it to you, but I don’t have any crayons with me.

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    lol... but in an adjective way can't it...

    i mean if we look at the backbenchs of parliament... are they not the 'elected trenches'?
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    upping for one more vote
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