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Thread: pondering why there are no responses

  1. #1
    MythDirection
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    pondering why there are no responses

    all positive apostles' hammers smash
    then a cerberus sounds if it's its wish
    crashing and then coming to a halt
    the Lord his sword plunged to the hilt
    still gazing back at his glorious light
    i know venom and penance is much too late
    in a daemons court that's cruelly dimmed
    the nearly blind forsook weep as truly damned

    honestly Father this time i promise to bother
    burn these words to never have each spoken
    aloud and lain so deeply, yet shallow in water
    our hell gets hotter with a new brand of token
    response, so detached by each despondent
    now i know why i see no further correspondence

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    Short...

    but from what i read i liked it.


    Thats nice stuff really...
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




  3. #3
    MythDirection
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    thank you

    provide a link and i will reply to your latest work
    Last edited by MythDirection; January 31st, 2005 at 04:32 PM

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    Hmm A fine piece of literature. I sounded like a character from Lord of the Ring reading it out loud
    I'm not particularly educated in the area of poetry and English...I percieve that you are. I just write to capture my feeling and express myself creativly.
    I like your writing though...Hmm I don't knwo what to say. It's too clever for me to comment :|

    sNoopfox
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  5. #5
    MythDirection
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    i appreciate your comments

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! sNoopfox's Avatar
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    Myth...Because of your evident knowledge of fine english and literature/poetry...
    I'd really appreciate some of your feed back or thoughts on some of my other poetry...
    The links are in my 'signiture' ... You maye prefer the Architect or Carbon Copy.

    sNoopfox
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    MythDirection
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    ok, i did it

    it took me 20 minutes of my time though

    and i will not over analyze freeverse anyways
    so there you have it

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