lets not sleep please...i only drop an open mic
once in a long time...peace
lets not sleep please...i only drop an open mic
once in a long time...peace
Good song,,,I really enjoyed this piece it had a lot of good detailed emotion with a good sence of power in your words...pretty concrete....i liked it...keep up the good work
I center my things now and then just to try and make my drops a little different...thats all
Soft Focus
..Returns..
uppin this
a very nice piece to be sure, enjoyable read, I would critique it, but it didn't seem to really have any problems. Maybe the use of slang in such a serious topic, a few more multi's wouldn't have gone un-appreciated. But overall very good drop. 8/10.
If you could hit mine up, I would be gratefull. its in my sig.
Very Very dope here..I love the way you used your words sometimes......came off smooth and very nicely done. Beautiful flow, wonderful storytelling, and the Change was very dope...good shit
Hence Forward.. BURR!
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Just watch My Back, I got the front.
Pretty hot, Nice wordplay...Blah
^damn u are wack...but thanx....uppin
nice flow..i liked your word choice alot
you switched it up along with your flow
good imagery i thought..nice concept you had here
I liked how all ya love at tha begining..
turned to hatred...nice drop
keep it up
uppin
chae..uppin
I agree this was a good piece.....I liked it, made a good read.....some things in this i could relate to.....sounds like something i would write lol, cause i write about this kind of stuff a lot....but yeah i liked it...had good flow to it i thought....the structure seemed good....had good imagary....overall a good piece here.
what most impressed me was your vocab and choice of wording....flow was very good...as well as structure....felt the metas and wordplay u were usin to....
u showed some imagry here....a bit descriptive but fell off at times....u could tell there was emotion in this peice and u took some time & effort on this.....good job....
really a good read ....and it was easy to get an idea of where u were comin from
keep it up...
dope shit!
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