..Sporadic.. Vs Micnificant

[Imperial1]

I say Sporadic's personals were better also his punches. I really didn't feel much of Mic's ish.

Imperial1

[..Sporadic..]

imperial would be nice if u actually gave a decent feedback..anyway 5th up

[TonyBrown]

aight, im not bitchin or nothin but i just gotta say this

i appreciate how most of da ppl actually gave an explanation *cough*Imperial *cough*

but newayz, uppinzzzzzzzz

[I-Hova]

not bad battle...both came pretty mehh ive seen beter but yeh here it is

sporadic with better personals and punches

mic had some good concepts but he worded them like ass and thats why they didnt register as hard hittin punches...

yeh so overall spor takes this with better overrall verse keep elevatin both of u

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

[Aines.ly Harriot]

Mic: Verse screamed beginner... very low quality personals which lacked complexity, nothing really stood out from your verse and shit needs to, focus on the fierceness of your punches... they need to be fierce and personal

Spor: Was an alright verse, though it Screamed beginner at me too (j/k) Personals were all right, the German Heritage made me laugh. Other than that the punches hit harder than Mic's and had more complexity...

v/Spor for a better battle verse with harder punches

[Ace of Aces]

close battle. both came pretty decent. flow and structure was fine in both verses, although it seemed kinda stretched in Mic. didn't have any real personals coming from either. the vocab in Sporadic made the consistency of flow pretty dope. punches alone came nice, pretty good concepts. altogether, i was feelin' Sporadic's verse better, harder punches.

v-Sporadic

ps. Sporadic, you forgot to poll man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148409

thanks.

peACE

[TonyBrown]

Mic: Verse screamed beginner... very low quality personals which lacked complexity, nothing really stood out from your verse and shit needs to, focus on the fierceness of your punches... they need to be fierce and personal

Spor: Was an alright verse, though it Screamed beginner at me too (j/k) Personals were all right, the German Heritage made me laugh. Other than that the punches hit harder than Mic's and had more complexity...

v/Spor for a better battle verse with harder punches

sorry but no im not a beginner

[Rule.]

micnificent-

my bars outweigh this nigga's by atleast a half a ton
his sig iz faka than britts tits, he dont really carry guns
?? Blah no.
wuteva skills this fake thug had, now im diminishin em'
u aint iller than me even wit Magic Johnson's condition(in his sig)
Eh, forced.
ur battle wont get set up, read da rules, no wackness allowed
so i dont no y im spendin time on this meaningless clown
Bad punch..
this bitch iz so ugly his own shadow dont follow him
im warnin u, if u see him, betta have da lights on dim
Corny humor, basically filler.
i dont even need a hot closer, this a ob-vi-ous win
i killed this nigga da way i did his om-in-ous twin
Nah.

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Sporadic-

He Contradicts Himself, Alais Leaves Me Slighlty Perplexed
Calls Himself Mic-nificant, but i only ever see him drop text
Cool.
Reatard's Stupidity reigns, check check neglect you ask for
I can tollerate your imbecility, but your wackness is hard to ingnore!
Nah.
Stands out, couldnt get his shit across..... even if he used a bridge
No need to point out hes shit at battles just look at his german heritage
Ok. lol..
Fuck this imbarrasment prides shattered glass will not be restored
Loses far over weigh his wins so he hides his own battle record
Blah no..
dick head, checking on mic's and keys wonders y get no res-pect
those didnt need it, look at your spelling mmm could of used a check
Kalkghaigeakgjag'dgfdk..blah.

Overall, wasnt the greatest battle, but really one-sided here. Micnificent, you gotta lot of improving to do bro.. no hate, but your personals and punches were mad weak.. alot of basic concepts and a lack of wit and creativity. Sporadic, kinda a mediocre verse, keep improving your creativity with your punches.. german line was humorous.. Stay up fellas.

Vote / Sporadic