Crew Battle : DeMiurgiC (IJL) vs. Nephil (HF)

[TheUnderRated]

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"Beholding Divinity" is cool. Due Friday?[/QUOTE]
^thats topic.
Checkin when your ready no line limit.

[Nephil]

k - check

[TheUnderRated]

indeed check to wreck for respect and regrets and redigti

[Nephil]

He's a physical bastard
but a mystical master
and the sole principal factor
in our whole reprehensible chapter
he was hung from a rafter
and stung with laughter
but in the year 2 B.C.E.
the world's changed forever after...

Melchior
I am Magi... and I have seen the Messiah
with rapt eyes I beheld the king of Gaia
allow me, strangers, to narrate my path
I now see the dangers innate to my craft...

Ever since I was child I had a knack for commerce
I remember with a smile selling rats to farmers
feigning they were ground birds to make a couple coins
by the time I was sixteen I had enough to join
the prestigious guild of Magi - I had to bob and kneel
with just my skill I trapped guys in bonds and deals
I know I would rob and steal and then probably feel
penitent - but my limited experience as a immigrant
made me different - that star changed my life!
from afar came the light - traveling through shaded night
‘till I said, “What good is my bullion? What merit are my piles of gold?
I’m through being a fool son, I’ll share it with the child that’s foretold...”

He's a physical bastard
but a mystical master
and the sole principal factor
in our whole reprehensible chapter
he was hung from a rafter
and stung with laughter
but in the year 2 B.C.E.
the world's changed forever after...

Balthasar and Gaspar
We are Magi... and we have seen the Christ
with rapt eyes we beheld the king of skies
allow us, please, to describe our travels
we now see how our designs unraveled...

Born as twins amidst the four winds
we sailed the seven proper seas
and beheld the heavenly prophecies
craving that gust of truth invoked in each vision
we lustily use the smoke of hashish that’s rich and
undeniably potent - violently hopin’ for a sign from above
sensing it’s time in our blood for the divine to come up
calculating the date from Daniel’s prophecy
debating the place our manual says the god’ll be
regardless his sovereignty needs to be recognized
so we see to collect a prize for the prince of our precious herbs
we’ll present and offer costly frankincense and myrrh...

He's a physical bastard
but a mystical master
and the sole principal factor
in our whole reprehensible chapter
he was hung from a rafter
and stung with laughter
but in the year 2 B.C.E.
the world's changed forever after...

The Magi, or Wise Men, as with much in this world were hardly as “wise” as they believed. Their interference almost brought about the death of the Christ. It is a powerful reminder that we should rarely blindly follow anything, especially falling stars...

...don’t follow me.

[TheUnderRated]

I perceived omnipotence greater than all mortal imagination....
My sins cleansed as I was bathed in eternal elation...
In exchange for salvation from everlasting damnation....
I was taught to serve my lord, my destined vocation...
I was instructed to gaze upon divinity there shone a great light...
My eyes were melted instantly to hold the liquid I closed them tight..
Fear not my child open them and see for your first time...
Clear liquid streamed forth as I was metamorphasized to sublime...
I was lifted above the universe, I looked down upon the sky...
My back laden with ivory wings, I felt them too massive to fly...
I returned from my flight and there was told to pacify...
For throughout eternal life time would not pass me by...
First though I must receive another gift for my ascension...
I gazed anew upon divinity and was imparted universal comprehension..
I knew how to solve any problem the answer to any question...
But my orders where to leave mortals to their own discretion..
In return for these gifts I would forever humble myself in his presence...
And from that day take it upon myself to go and spread his message....
Although Never again can I gaze upon the trinity of divinity...
There deep within me lies an unspoken affinity....

[TheUnderRated]

uppN good drop SMZ much respect..........................

[Escar]

Wow, this was dope.

SMZ's verse owned it. Really interesting, kept me interested throughout the whole time I was reading it. Dope story, no doubt. Like how you arranged everything, as well as how you described everything. The ending was fucking dope, didn't see it coming, plus I haven't seen shit like that in quite some time on RB. That owned it.

Dem's shit was dope too. Complexity was definitely there. Vocab. was dope as well, liked it. I enjoyed it, but not as much as SMZ's verse. You should've tried to fit in a dope story. Still, yours had great imagery too. Very nice shit you got there.

V/SMZ a.k.a. Nephil

Peace

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[Meks.]

dem's was creative... told a decent story, u stayed consistant... metas were there...
flow was on point... it seemed to lack in a ppeal top the audience tho.

fav lines :
gazed anew upon divinity and was imparted universal comprehension..
I knew how to solve any problem the answer to any question...
But my orders where to leave mortals to their own discretion..
In return for these gifts I would forever humble myself in his presence...



smz - was very much more in depth exploration of his mind, and what it felt on the topic, simply displaying more emotion and drive to explore this topic gives him the win.
his flow was dope, imagry was there.... metas were nice... story telling was good, u told a good story.

fav lines:
He's a physical bastard
but a mystical master
and the sole principal factor
in our whole reprehensible chapter
he was hung from a rafter
and stung with laughter
but in the year 2 B.C.E.
the world's changed forever after...
^ some eminem on infinite type shit.....

vote - nephil. good battle from both of you

[Nephil]

thnx - uppn - will return favors tonight...

[CAMROK]

Wow... this was really some nice competition from both of you... both pieces were outstanding in their own measures.. it sucks to have to pick.

neph- This piece was almost perfect.. literally, for this topic at hand. I really have no criticism's to what you wrote. Flow was fine, everything else. Story was very dope.. and the scheme you portrayed it in. Vocab wasn't extraordinary, but it was still good, and I think with higher vocab then what you did, it would'nt have gone as well with the piece. So you didn't force anything. Very well done....

dem- shit, man. This had some outstanding imagery in it. Better then neph's verse, but he came with alot more emotion and a better story, overall. Two completely different takes.... your vocab was great, imagery qualities. Flow was good. Really no complaints either....

I have to go with neph.. just a better all around verse. Great story, great piece... dem's verse was above average as well, and would normally get a vote from me. But neph's verse I feel just took it.

vote-neph

[TheUnderRated]

Fuck the last two votes shut it down......................

[SMZ]

Escar and CAMROK - I did not see any open battles from y'all to vote on - If you want me to check something drop a link...

[Escar]

^^Yo if it's possible, hit this up for me.

This is the oldest & wackest battle of my life, lol.

I'm the Tenikon dude there.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138138

Peace

[Nephil]

I talked to DeMiurgiC and he asked for this to just be closed - he's conceeding...