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Urchin
-KareLess-
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vote kare...why?...i just felt he came harder...
he had better overall punchlines...
the ones urchin threw were ok but not all there...
both can elavate and be more creative...
at points on both verses i smelled playedness...
but yeah sometimes theres a tendensy to do that...
flow was aight in both areas...format was fucked,
from kare...so fix that homie...
but yeah...overall kare takes it by a lil bit...
but that lil bit goes a long way...
like just punches, personals, flow, metas,...
goes to kare...good battle though...
vote...kareless...
yo hit up my battle with lyricallyabbusiv...
im finally getting real votes...thank you man...
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This was a good battle.
Kareless came with stretched lines.
And his punches wasnt the best, capitalizing WORDS SOMETIMES, AND MOST OF THEM WAS PLAYED.
Urchin came fairly decent though, with a few nicve punches.
also the structure helps, but it was mostly the similies and metas he had.
that is what won the battle for him.
v/Urchin, in a fairly close battle.
this battle was pretty weak ive seen a lot better, this was real simple with no real creatitity to the bars.
Urchin: you got a good structure and a nice flow, but got some played used up punches, just work and that and youll have it down pat
Kare: your bars were extremely stretched at times and you really brought nothing to the table
Vote: Kareless
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First off I can't vote....That being said Urchin your shit was off the chain I aint dick ridin, alot of people need to fuckin read more than the shit they see on the internet... your punches made sense the Micheal J fox line...the Transformer line compared to generic as go bots hey it aint your fault if peoples intellect aint up to par I got all your punches...your shit was funny
kareless rhyme was kind of basic aint nothin wrong with that but today the funnier punches won....neither really had to much personal stuff wich is cool cause fuck ya'll don't know one another do you...and were on the INTERNET....
Here's another up on my quest to get 100 posts on this shit
upping this shit...
142 views and 2 poll votes..wtf..
vote vote vote
not even waisting my time, i saw you guys. Lookin for votes. But i cant poll vote so its useless.
ehh battle.
You try so hard to be unique, but I'm afraid you're not holmes
Cause your style is antiquated worse than cellular block phones
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best part of your whole verse…but you were more talking about yourself than kareless… I herd that ike, tina shit from snoop dogg… and the suck dick for bus tickets… wack..
kareless,
better verse overall… didn’t come to hard but you did enough to win the battle…
ehh kareless takes this pretty easy
he had the flow goin the better punches the better personals
i didnt like that strucuter though work on it...urchin you
can use some work do .. you had played concepts... bad
setups and just some blah punches...kareless wins
in my opinion..
V/ Kareless
Urchin - This would have been close, but you killed yourself with a few lines. That thing about sucking a million cocks was GAY. As was the thing about sucking dick for bus tickets. Don't talk about sucking dick... it's not a good punch and extremely uncreative and it basically lost it for you though you'd have prolly lost anyway.
Kareless - Eh, not great, but something i guess it took you 10 mins not bad at all. The Lamar Odom thing was good and the opener at first looked really wack, but it turned out to be pretty funny with the banana thing. You easily take this with much harder punches and for not talking about sucking dick.
Vote - Kareless
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