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Holla back check tha battle and vote ima go first
Emulated
Deus_Deluxe
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10-12 lines
Holla back check tha battle and vote ima go first
Holla man ima murder this cat like friskies
Yo check me, Im the new cat thats come around
and ive battled better bitches at a dog pound
Dont hate on the rhymes, can u handle that
I can emulate ur lines to make that white shit sound black
No doubt ima murderous fella
D-D will pull out the oozie that will go stait through ya
Come on dude why'd u wannna go against me,
thats like a rabbit in a turtle race, no possibility
alright emulator do ur thing,
but i bet by the end of this ull be like rubin and start to sing (im sorry) lol
holla at me EM
check in
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If you Die with the devils first kiss.then Look to the sky and Say This:
I live High in the essence of unbleviable Gods Hands
I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
Check in.......nigga i paper spit 4 u so holla at me come back
deluxe, u need to stop rappin nobody feels u...
nigga that was a weak verse, i got writers block and im bout to kill u...
u aint on my level, but i do get scared if theres a gay nigga behind me...
he talk tough on the net, but when he see me, he gonna end up like this smiley...
u regret replyin,those punches were all lame...
so tell ur mom u wanna closed casket to hide the shame...
u talk all this trash, good thing no one paid attention...
all his punches had no "AIM", so nobody gonna get the message...
u was scared when u seen me say checkin in wit no fear...
they say relaunched is wack, they prolly dyin for u to go there...
u want me to holla at, and u cum in ya back kid (he said that in post 4)...
well if it wasnt obvious for yall right there, this certifies that hes a faggot ....
this was weak as shyt
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If you Die with the devils first kiss.then Look to the sky and Say This:
I live High in the essence of unbleviable Gods Hands
I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
whoa this was mainly a one-sided battle
Deus-Deluxe-ya verse was very weak no good punches, or personals, nothing special in ya verse, ya structure was lame, and most of the shit u said didnt even rhyme
comon dawg "against me" and "possibility" comon just elevate more on ya rhyme scheme
Emulated-ya verse could have been betta, but u had good enough punches and personals that got him, ya structure was good, overall pretty good verse good use of the smiley icon, but u still need to elevate
V/Emulated
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uppin.
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If you Die with the devils first kiss.then Look to the sky and Say This:
I live High in the essence of unbleviable Gods Hands
I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
WHOOOOOOOOOOOO the personals burned the hell out of me..nigga really tried to kill me....ima keep at it tho
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THA MC OF THE FUTURE OF HIP HOP
Holla back be an mc and vote
uppin 2
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If you Die with the devils first kiss.then Look to the sky and Say This:
I live High in the essence of unbleviable Gods Hands
I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
uppin3
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If you Die with the devils first kiss.then Look to the sky and Say This:
I live High in the essence of unbleviable Gods Hands
I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
4...omg deus come use ur ups
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I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
one sided
emulated-overall i kind of liked your verse it was one of the better ones that i have read from you, i think you had great structure, and your punches were directed straigth at him and hit him descently, nice word flow and everything man keep this up props to you
Deus- i didnt really like your verse that much man, i mean i dont think it was as bad as phil said but it was kind of lame, i didnt think that your structure was that good because your word flow was off, and i think your shit was just to basic, try and elevate and make your shit more of one topic
V/Emulated
yo fasho this was an extremable enjoyin read from both emcees... I gotta vote for emulated tho - but ill break it down fa ya fasho
Yo check me, Im the new cat thats come around
and ive battled better bitches at a dog pound
nice openin fasho' 3/5
Dont hate on the rhymes, can u handle that
I can emulate ur lines to make that white shit sound black
thats a filler yo 2/5
No doubt ima murderous fella
D-D will pull out the oozie that will go stait through ya
filler yo 2/5
Come on dude why'd u wannna go against me,
thats like a rabbit in a turtle race, no possibility
thats ight 2.5/5
alright emulator do ur thing,
but i bet by the end of this ull be like rubin and start to sing (im sorry) lol
thats ight finsher 2.5/5
deluxe, u need to stop rappin nobody feels u...
nigga that was a weak verse, i got writers block and im bout to kill u...
str8 openin 3/5
u aint on my level, but i do get scared if theres a gay nigga behind me...
he talk tough on the net, but when he see me, he gonna end up like this smiley...
straight 3/5
u regret replyin,those punches were all lame...
so tell ur mom u wanna closed casket to hide the shame...
u talk all this trash, good thing no one paid attention...
all his punches had no "AIM", so nobody gonna get the message...
u was scared when u seen me say checkin in wit no fear...
they say relaunched is wack, they prolly dyin for u to go there...
u want me to holla at, and u cum in ya back kid (he said that in post 4)...
well if it wasnt obvious for yall right there, this certifies that hes a faggot ....
straight all throughout 3/5
v/emulated
Deus_Deluxe:
Holla man ima murder this cat like friskies
Yo check me, Im the new cat thats come around
and ive battled better bitches at a dog pound
....umm...why were you battling bitches at a dog pound?
Dont hate on the rhymes, can u handle that
I can emulate ur lines to make that white shit sound black
no...just no......
No doubt ima murderous fella
D-D will pull out the oozie that will go stait through ya
no.....
Come on dude why'd u wannna go against me,
thats like a rabbit in a turtle race, no possibility
yes, but that rabbit gets the big head and loses to the turtle.
alright emulator do ur thing,
but i bet by the end of this ull be like rubin and start to sing
Don't understand...
Over All:This is like a typical NEWB drop....talkin about how they so big bad and tough, they can take on the best of the best....DON'T DO THAT!!!!
You want to embarass your opponent, not come off like some hardass....
Next, ELEVATE!!! You kept switching from one thing to another.
You went from battlin to copyin to killin....DON'T DO THAT!!!!
and if you do, be more profolic(sp?) or stress on the concept of what you tryin to do in an embarassing way.....There's just so much more......
Imporve your flow, structure, elevation, punches, EVERYTHING!!!
You'll get better......Don't worry right now...just keep battlin......
1/10 he at least had rhymin words.....poor.
Emulated
deluxe, u need to stop rappin nobody feels u...
nigga that was a weak verse, i got writers block and im bout to kill u...
okay, you just dissed him and yourself......wtf?
u aint on my level, but i do get scared if theres a gay nigga behind me...
he talk tough on the net, but when he see me, he gonna end up like this smiley...
LOL!!! That's so true.....
u regret replyin,those punches were all lame...
so tell ur mom u wanna closed casket to hide the shame...
lol....okay punch.
u talk all this trash, good thing no one paid attention...
all his punches had no "AIM", so nobody gonna get the message...
lol.....again okay punch.
u was scared when u seen me say checkin in wit no fear...
they say relaunched is wack, they prolly dyin for u to go there...
Don't underdstand.....elevate
u want me to holla at, and u cum in ya back kid (he said that in post 4)...
well if it wasnt obvious for yall right there, this certifies that hes a faggot ....
hmmm.....
this was weak as shyt
Over All: okay drop....you had some really fucked up flow but not nearly as bad as the other guy....I kindof felt the punches hittin him hard....but you need to elevate some more.....there were some parts that made no sense...
still, over all, it was an okay drop....
5/10 average drop
Vote/Emulated
Deluxe-wow, you had some horrible shit. First of all, you had some wacked structure. Your lines were so un even that some of the lines didn't even rhyme. You should learn to make em' about the same length. Well, wack structure usually means wack flow. And your shit had some real wack flow, it barely rhymed. Your punches were weak. Stupid stupid lines..."better bitches at a dog pound" this might be considered good for a 4th grader man, that is some elementary shit. Overall, you had wack flow, wack rhyme scheme, wack punches, and a pretty bad verse. 2/10
Emu-Your lines were even enough that it didn't bother the rhyme scheme which is more than I can say from deluxe. Your punches weren't horrible but they weren't anything special. Well, the writers block line was pretty good. Seriously, you coulda killed the kid with just that line. Your vocab wasn't bullshit either. You had decent flow, and some original punches. Overall, better structure, way better rhyme scheme, better punches, better damn everything. You had this, overall-7/10
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murder murder
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