Woot.. all in fun.. I figured what I said to ILLunatic would go right to Jae.. anyway.
10 Lines
normal rules
uhmm, drop whenever, before midnight Monday Night atleast
Pz.
Jae Cyph
FormulaSquared
Woot.. all in fun.. I figured what I said to ILLunatic would go right to Jae.. anyway.
10 Lines
normal rules
uhmm, drop whenever, before midnight Monday Night atleast
Pz.
check in - i`ll drop tonight.. and god damn me.. I meant 12 lines instead of 10.. Cyph.. it`s your call.. you said 10-12 and I like having as many lines as I can.. so if you want.. we`ll do 12.. and yeah, you can turn it into a diss line.. won`t bother me.
Contrary to popular belief, you`re small to me..
.. A wallet-sized picture
Killing your chances at winning - I`m RB`s Derek Fisher
Straight out of the Blues Brothers movie, Cyph - You`re ugly
W/ girl for 8 months.. she must be blind and you`re damn sure lucky
I can`t see your skills Cyph - like a reflectorless bike
And your RB career is like your voice - waay over hyped
I know your e-rep makes your head swell up - it`s scary
But damn man, it took you 2 weeks to drop against Trakz
.. and you call yourself legendary
Now before this is over, i`ll give you your wish to avoid bitching
Jae Cyph
There - you`re now the center of attention.
ok - had to drop now or I wouldn`t of been able to do it tonight.. g`luck Cyph.
J a y Spells Me: Sup I`m Battling Your Friend Formula . .
BILLS Spells Me: Wants Personals?
BILLS Spells Me: his dad hates him .. like practically disowned him
BILLS Spells Me: and everybody knows he sucks at rap lol.
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. .Fuck Formula I`m Asking Myself
Why I Must Go Farther
But EVERYBODY Fuckin` Hates You-
Even Your Father ..
. .Man It's Pitiful He Really Thinks -
I Give A Damn . .
But I`m Done With Formula-
I Just Passed Final Exams ..
. .Example - Solve For X
Then Divide By Two. .
If Stretch Bars + Played Lines Is Dope -
Then X = You. .
. . I`ll Fuckin' Vex Your Crew,
Ya`ll Hear The News?
IJL Isn't A Squad It's Formulas
Term For I Just Lose..
. . . Formula - You Suck I Come Half Assed
And I`m Still On Top -
And I Havnt Seen Nothing As Wack That Battle Verse
Other Than Your Last Drop . .
. . . And Now You're All Asking Why
I typed Like This And The Answer Is. .
Now This Battle's One Sided AND
I`m The Center Of Attention, Bitch . .
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Half Assed - Had Exams + No Time . so blah
G`Luck..
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v/FormulaContrary to popular belief, you`re small to me..
.. A wallet-sized picture
Killing your chances at winning - I`m RB`s Derek Fisher
some wit here - decent - .45
Straight out of the Blues Brothers movie, Cyph - You`re ugly
W/ girl for 8 months.. she must be blind and you`re damn sure lucky
ehh - not feeling this - crappy punch - .25
I can`t see your skills Cyph - like a reflectorless bike
And your RB career is like your voice - waay over hyped
heh - kinda funny - pretty good - .7
I know your e-rep makes your head swell up - it`s scary
But damn man, it took you 2 weeks to drop against Trakz
.. and you call yourself legendary
personal - kinda clever - a tad stretched - .6
Now before this is over, i`ll give you your wish to avoid bitching
Jae Cyph
There - you`re now the center of attention.
heh - this was somewhat amusing - haven't seen it done before - but then I don't peep battles that often - .65
Overall - 5.3 - overall a decent verse with some decent punches
. .Fuck Formula I`m Asking Myself
Why I Must Go Farther
But EVERYBODY Fuckin` Hates You-
Even Your Father ..
Personal - setup line blows - that probably hurt though - .7
. .Man It's Pitiful He Really Thinks -
I Give A Damn . .
But I`m Done With Formula-
I Just Passed Final Exams ..
ehh - wordplay - not very hard-hitting though - .4
. .Example - Solve For X
Then Divide By Two. .
If Stretch Bars + Played Lines Is Dope -
Then X = You. .
kinda clever - decent punch - .55
. . I`ll Fuckin' Vex Your Crew,
Ya`ll Hear The News?
IJL Isn't A Squad It's Formulas
Term For I Just Lose..
personal - second line seems a wee bit off rhythm - decent - .5
. . . Formula - You Suck I Come Half Assed
And I`m Still On Top -
And I Havnt Seen Nothing As Wack That Battle Verse
Other Than Your Last Drop . .
ehh - even I've seen this horse beaten to death - .2
. . . And Now You're All Asking Why
I typed Like This And The Answer Is. .
Now This Battle's One Sided AND
I`m The Center Of Attention, Bitch . .
it said normal rules - which includes no feeding - so this blows - .0
Overall - 3.9 - your feeding in the last line hurt you - if you had made that a dope punch instead you could've got his maybe
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ehh - sorry - my voting's skewed a little - Jae Cyph tallies should be:
.7, .45, .6, .55, .2, .0 - thus equaling 4.2 and still a loss because of the feed
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lol this battle was kinda weak but cyph won.
formula's punches sucked.
cyphs weren't great.
lol@ the father line, x =. only decent ones.
votecyPh
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Feeding ? What The Fuck . . . That Rule Dissapeared Years Ago . .
Gay Rule, But 1-1.
i belive cyph won this, formula didnt have a single connection, then again, cyph only got hot in the middle, and the rest fell off, form just didnt come hard enuff, i dunno, cyphs was just better
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Formula - Your punches really hit 'em hard, but ur flow was wack. There were so many stretched lines. Structure was good though. Punches could've been better if you focused on 'em, but it's aight. Work on your flow man.
Cyph - Man that verse was wack. Liked the flow, but the rest was just wack. Punches weren't so good. Structure was not bad, but ugh.... You had a few good lines, like that one with "X = You". You should work on your punches.
Vote - F
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Before when I voted I forgot to poll vote
So I just did. pz
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