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Blind spit
No feeding, biteing, recycling
No crew, hate, dick riding votes
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Blind spit
No feeding, biteing, recycling
No crew, hate, dick riding votes
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biting...
let me know when you're ready...
lol@kids still callin out Avalon even though I haven't used this name in about 6-7 months...
AlieNation
..GrindHouse..
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we see you Cock-A-Roaches looking...
Coming Soon
ya wins are luck, You n' ya deer friends teeth'll catch slugs hardest,
it's open season on newbies... I'm always shootin at bucked targets...
me first, why'd you choose... I describe ya name best - The ill,
cause if this was a battle of skill then you'd have nothing to lose...
I propose when it comes to votes you realize I just whored ya,
you'll be mentioned when vets say: Did Dimez write that verse for ya..?
duck you should up ya skill... before you can be the ill dude,
I read the rules and 60% of the last line wouldn't mean shit to you...
this must hurt you,
that I can write a line that is roughly the same size as two of my normal lines and not really rhyme it correctly and still all the frontline voters'll say Av just merked you directly...
it's on you...
AlieNation
..GrindHouse..
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we see you Cock-A-Roaches looking...
Coming Soon
Here we go!
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Biography: "i'm back"............ now the sites gone to shit
Wasn't you gone in the first place, due to the fact you bit
Look at your application for Elite, notice your 2nd on the list
Av sorry buddy, but your not Elite.. Now lets move on with this
And is sad, your battling newbies.. no wonder you was dope
13 times you murderd newbies, battled vets and went down a slope
Merk Squad Eh.. they're offically over, you've said it yourself
Haha..shoulda seen this comin, well whats done is done, and is delt
Funny, i just sonned an RB Legend..only reason he is, is cuz of mind theory
Watch Av get dick rode, by 13th, Chrit, or BribeOne.. Thats my theory
Check links if you dont understand punch or personal
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Average battle..
Avalon had the better verse with the punches and wordplay,
but the ill's verse was filled with personals..but not that many punches at all...
Avalon got this..but not by much..
i was expecting a better battle by both...
V-AV
Peace
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How the hell have I lost to both of you?
This battle kinda sucked, gents.
Outdated personals from Ill...
And a blasse` attitude from a non caring Av...
(who didn't know an alias was afoot)
Still, I dunno...
Av took this despite the surprise attack from Lunatic...
Ill had personals o plenty, but choked, didn't deliver them right, didn't set up punches properly and missed impact.
Like I said earlier, outdated and way too many links!!!
Av did the norm, except had no fire, didn't burn em...
Just outclassed him, mostly due to wordplay and experience.
Tsk, tsk, tsk gentlemen...
And I should fuckin talk!
Peace
Hit this back, will you?
hmmmmmm...im seein things differently in this one
avalon- you came really soft...i think you were expecting a newb...i shouldnt be giving you advice but never underestimate anybody...your punches were soft and there not that many notable personals...the flow was good and so was the structure...but the verse itself was preeety soft......
ill- you stepped up...even though the links were a pain..they helped the personals....it really helped your verse. The flow was ok and so was the structure....work on things..you got potential...opener and closer was good.......good verse keep it up
verdict- ill just came harder and avcalon wasnt expeting him to
Alright...
av - I don't think you were expecting this to be an alias... cause your verse doesn't really show that u tried too hard here. I mean, you still had some good personals at certain points in ur verse, but the majority of it came somewhat soft. Softer then it should have been. It still flowed nice though...
ill - Seen you come better as well.. but your personals were better and harder hitting on your opponent then av's was on you. The links were good, show you have proof of all your personals on him. I don't find that to be a bad thing. Flowed well.... and you get my vote for simply putting more into this and having better connecting punches/personals in this battle...
vote- the ill
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2 of my boiz in a battle...
Glad to see avy back on , I thought u were banned?
Avalon I just wanna say add me on msn : princezz_dimez@hotmail.com
and add me on aim: TheRealistzG! I miss you hunni!
Anyways..
The Ill!
We all know he bit or w.e but thats getting kinda old!!
Good use of research and personals, it hurts when u use personals in battles!
your closer was ill.. but u rhymed theory twice.. ! Good job
Could have used more multis and wordplay.. but it was good!
Avalon...
I propose when it comes to votes you realize I just whored ya,
you'll be mentioned when vets say: Did Dimez write that verse for ya..?
^ LMAO!!!! good one... is this supposed to be a diss to me!?
damn avy ive seen so much better from u , bet u dont even know who ur battlin now.. too bad.. u just had to use my fuckin name.. i dont care ur loss
vote- the ill
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Upping number 1
Avalon votes - 1
The Ill votes - 3
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ok vote- the ill
and reason.......
the ill- yo i like ur verse mayne, ive been watching u battle kat, and ur pretty fuckin good. Ya verse had good vocab, wordplay, personals that hit on spot, punches that hit consistent, and ur verse had some funny parts as well. Over all this was a good verse form ya.
Avalon- u had a good verse as well, but some places ya verse seemed choppy, and kinda lost me on how to say it. U had aight wordplay, aight personals, good vocad, and ya punches were straight. Nothing spantacular, but i dont think u had this. If u just gettin back stick to ya old pray(newbs) to get used to spitten again.......no hate.
Vote- The Ill
Vote=The Ill
Avalon...obviously not your best...you underestimated you opponent and dropped basic lines not near the originality you are capable of...lines were ok...a lot of filler/played punches tho...
The Ill...pretty good verse...nice personals and punches...you had some played shit too..but your punches were harder and more direct than you opponents...nice verse man
Vote=The Ill
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