^DopeOriginally Posted by FanTa ZeE
^DopeOriginally Posted by FanTa ZeE
yo im soufsider u????Originally Posted by Daz
^WTF????Originally Posted by Soufsider
Dope piece here Pen .. Very dope .. Nicely written .. Dope content .. Pretty much nothing was wrong with it in my opnion .. Im likin' your stuff man .. Thank Edicius for tellin' me to peep ur collab wit him .. That's wat made me peep ur other stuff .. LoL .. Anyway .. Keep writin' man .. One
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This is probably the best open mic i have ever read in my life......
First off, flow was flawless... not once did i read this piece through and have ti come out sounding weird.... never fell off.... vocab... what can i say.... i didnt understand a total of 3 words here... thats never happened before in an open mic that ive read, so im happy... just learnt some new words... when it came to imagery and wordplay, this was second to none... i love how you flipped a played topic into something completely fresh and interesting... makes me think about the world
The only thing that could be improved is the rhyming... no multies... but that doesnt matter, i'd rather read this piece of beautiful storytelling than have it exchanged for more rhymes... keep up the excellent work
9.999999/10
DopeOriginally Posted by wogzta
Bringing back a Classic...
I don't know why...but....I feel like bringing this back.....
Uppin up a great classic I see....Penny Penny......
When will these people learn the ability in your writing is unmatched...
This piece was excellent...But GODDAAMN SOMEWHAT PUT COMMERCIAL VS UNDERGROUND IN LEGENDS SHIT ASS FUCK TITTY BANGIN TWO DOLLAR WHORES!!!!
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damn fam.............your killing shit
i respect you more than any other RB member........youre skill with words is crazy man
vocab killed it.......the words flowed well.....lines timed perfectly.........here comes a legend......if you aint already the best for topical........ill speak to THE END for ya and have something done bout it!!
u got some good lyrics there, the rhyme waz off da chain and the terms u use iz off de hook son 5 stars right there, that waz hot.