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Thread: Spittin

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    Spittin

    most of ya'll need to quit can't you see the signs/
    my lines out WRAP ur rhymes crawl down ur back and break ur spine/
    i'm dope like a dealer call me aka weapon concealer/
    packin more than guns in my draws now tell me whose realer/
    i can spit a rap/ flip it back/ make ur eyes spin all in the same trak/
    tell me what i lack you'll say sumtin' dumb/ or maybe the truth but i shit u more than the runs/
    i stay won (one) battle losses confuse me/ cuz' u can abuse me more than a church family/
    my stamina remains to be at a high/ sigh in relief do it twice and u might die/ i don't lie, i can't, but i can cuss/
    fuck, shit, ass, bitch so many dirty word's can give ya a head rush

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    Yo, if you just get ya structure on que, you might have potential.. Its was a good lil quick read, think it went off a lil at the end, but good stuff.. Keep elevating, everyone is always elevating no matta what status they are..
    "Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."

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    A dont like these type of OM...

    They seem to me... That they dont belong in here... Its not what a would class as a OM...

    You need to work on your structure... Sort out your flow aswell...
    Also need to use a wider range of vocabulary... This wasnt very complex at all... Sort that out...

    Wasnt feelin this verse at all... As a said... Dont like self-glorification verses... Find them pointless... Played...

    Try a interesting topic...

    Pz

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    Its str8 I liked it to a extent holla at me
    Hottest Free Agent Holla at yah boy

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