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    Reverse...

    no need for explanation....read the title....
    READ SLOW FOR UNDERSTANDING

    ~death is rap, even more~
    ~tell to darkness in explore~
    ~breath held, i open doors~
    ~candle lit a taking souls right or left~
    ~handle this in death~
    ~choose way, which to go~
    ~lose always and everything wrote~
    ~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~
    ~shivering spine my pen dropped~
    ~chilvary and happiness stopped~
    ~bittersweet is what once thought~
    ~slit wrists, bleeding, life fading~
    ~this often gets life all for debating~
    ~table to walking, go standing still~
    ~able not, thinking too straight keeps it real~
    ~labeled plots my kill~
    ~standing to couch is close~
    ~landing on punches connecting slow~
    ~fighting keep, pouring blood~
    ~lighting cigarettes calming nerves coming luck~
    ~notice what(s) is hellucination~
    ~lotus dark seeing beginning desperation~
    ~loaded gun is nearby~
    ~knowin there is fear lies~
    ~going away, turned looked mirror~
    ~flowing what(s) is clearer~
    ~seeing straight anymore high not~
    ~being real i'ma boiling life blazing pot~

    in case u don't get it......read forward between every ~ ~ and backwards from the end.....word for word....lol....should be loved for those who understand....

    peace
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    Last edited by SmokaJoka; September 2nd, 2003 at 05:15 PM

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    lol....damnit.....5 or 6 views and no reply.....

    peace
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    damn son...this was sick...kinda abstract...and the whole backwardz reading thig is madd unique...creativity at it's fullest...I got a feelinga lot of cats ain't gonna understand this though...lol...but keep doin' ya thing cuzzin'...oh...and can you hit up my 3 latest open mics?????? They called "the truth ft. Enhance"
    "4:12am(living in death)" and "cleptomaniak'z fantasy"...thanks man...holla...

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    Liked the backwords thing nice creativity, nice drop....

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    That was a sick drop bro....................
    Keep up the good work......................



    PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

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    yeah...the basis is a guy is high and he is hellucinating....check it......

    ~lose always and everything wrote~
    ~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~
    ~shivering spine my pen dropped~

    ^^trying to write while high....

    ~standing to couch is close~

    ^^standing to couch is close.....he sits

    ~notice what(s) is hellucination~

    ^^basis of story

    ~going away, turned looked mirror~

    ^^he looked to the mirror....while he was walking away and turning

    should take care of some confusion.....

    peace
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    i don't have enough braincels to comprehend that....lol


    nah raw sawn liked the style lil complicated but i got it holmes....
    vocab was off but still all the ish was hot...

    ones

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    ILL SHIT Finally some worthy Open Mics i read.................


    How u used the creativeness is wonderfull man

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    Yo Inventive dawg,liked alot of tha wordplay and abstract is a good word to describe this,alot of quotable lines,but most of tha peice was on balance good.
    I'd give this 8.5/10 dawg.

    Peace,yo hit mine up plz.

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    coo coo....appreciate it.....vocab had to be weak in this though....hard to talk backwords with big words...lol.....

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    lol uppin for my anerxic cat her named sabastion

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    ^^name is not sabastion.....lol

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    like everyone else said it was tight nice work

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    ^^think ur just trying to get posts up......

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    man hot shit here, never seen that before, its like a fuckin murder mystery or somethin. nice references to the mirror, with the mirrored verse and shit. like the (S) hallucinations and shit. nice work could this possibly worthy of legends?

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